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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!!!!!!!! MUST HAVE MORE! MUTS-HAVE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you have a bit of a grammer problem, but that realy dosen't matter when it comes to wrighting fanfics much, as long as people can understand it.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD, the very first Cyborg 009 fic I\'ve ever read and I love it!! You must continue!! Plz??? I also like the way you have good grammar and all that stuff. It makes the fic that much more enjoyable. X3 Write more soon!!
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Vladimir if you think I can do better, I\'m open to sugeustions. Don\'t be scared to put a few ideas on the board if you\'re not satisfied with my story. neko_tlc@yahoo.com is my email addy, talk to me if you want. I think chapter two needs a revision anyway!
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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although it was a nice touch using the end of volume 10 as a starting point... the writing itself is shopworn and hackneyed. And the tenses switched up a little in that last chapter.
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very well written, and cute, I can't wait to see more it's very very good you get a gold star... two more gold stars and you can get a cookie.
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What happens? You must finish this story it is getting good I mean real good. I am loving it!!You must update hurry!!!!Please!!!!!* puppy eyes* Heh jk take your time. But you must hurry!!!:P
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve always supported Jet and Joe...So opposite yet so right ^^. I hope you update soon, this has been a good read ^^.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all hehehee..
ya sould right more ya know
hope002 gets to tell009 his feelin fer him.
ya sould right more ya know
hope002 gets to tell009 his feelin fer him.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic could be a pretty nice one - if you work in the characterization. Jet, Joe and Francoise... *facepalm*
Jet\'s not prone to angst. He takes no crap and is very straightforward. If he likes you, he\'ll tell you. Most likely will search for the time, but he WILL.
Joe is not a wuss. He\'s quite mentally strong for a boy whose world has been shaken once and again. And I doubt he\'d go in tears so easily. I just remember him crying once or twice in the whole series.
Francoise is not clingy. She\'s actually quite a selfless girl and quite reserved about herself. She\'d never cling to Joe like a ditzy girl. She\'d never act like a highschool bitch in the making.
Please take those facts in consideration. Thanks.
Jet\'s not prone to angst. He takes no crap and is very straightforward. If he likes you, he\'ll tell you. Most likely will search for the time, but he WILL.
Joe is not a wuss. He\'s quite mentally strong for a boy whose world has been shaken once and again. And I doubt he\'d go in tears so easily. I just remember him crying once or twice in the whole series.
Francoise is not clingy. She\'s actually quite a selfless girl and quite reserved about herself. She\'d never cling to Joe like a ditzy girl. She\'d never act like a highschool bitch in the making.
Please take those facts in consideration. Thanks.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The next chap, I want the next chap, I demand the next chap...*cough, cough* sorry I got a little carried away there. If you could not tell I really, really, REALLY, liked your fic. Pleassssseeeee up date soon. ^^