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good story. update soon.

Hey

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thats was so cute at the end. I realy do like this story. Gotta add to favs. bye.

Ok, here i go. That has got to be one of the best (and im not kidding) Faieceieces I have ever read. It matched to manga so closely it was almost scary. You captured the way Ryo really felt about Dee so perfectly, I was amazed. Especially the way you portrayed their actions, like with Ryo and his ridiculously big pillow on the couch, and Dee hiding from Drake. I feel compelled to say that Cal does not live with her mom...she lives with her aunt... Sorry, jest had to get that off my chest. Plus I found Bikky to be a little too mean for my tastes, thatthat really did help to add to the drama of the story. plus the part where Dee pushed Ryo back but then, in the file room he went all the way...that kinda contradicted itself too. But other than those small things, Ink ynk you did an excellent job!!!

Great story! I like how you characterized Dee and Ryo - they\'re sooo SEXY together! Please continue the story with more lemony goodness. Keep up the fantastic writing! :)

Fucking sexy.

Very good, i like it a lot, and the end is funny i love it too!! I hope to see more!!

That was really good! but you havent gotten all the way to the lemony freshness yet... Oh well! Great story! can\'t wait to see what bikky\'s cooking up!

Come on, UPDATE!!!!!!^o^
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I lik. It. Its really good. I hope you keep writting it^^ I cant wait for the next part.

Awesome!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!