rate_review Reviews

Not bad so far. :3 You\'ve got some very nice description, the imagery in certain parts is quite vivid. My one complaint... Using terms like \"glomp\" and \"bishie,\" which are pretty much exclusive to the fangirl vocabulary, have a way of shattering the mood that you do such a good job of creating. They\'re not in context, so it\'s distracting.

Oh - but you get bonus points for the pairing! X3 It\'s a royal pain finding any Dio/Claus yaoi, despite what an entirely obvious and plausible pairing it is.

How fair well they go? with out eather of them being torn apart from eachother? who well save who now? and who well try and brake them apart?
Let us hope they don\'t trust wro wrong people who they well tell about there emotions to. is there going to be some evil ware love one was?.

They kissed? there 1st one right? so what going down in the next one someome might walk in on them...I hope not and dosen\'t he have to return to...
The air ship pritty soon? before it get too dark out side. and maybe the rain might stop.

Well geting closer by every kiss right? I hope non of them don\'t pass out from the emotional kiss one qustion are they and couple now?
And yes I saw the hints I wonder how eveone going to take it win they find out about them? good bad?

Well the last time I saw LE is win Claus and Tatiana get lost in the desret togher and sort of and Bond is from like and brother and sister one...since
Tatiana care more about *Alistar* more then anything if you saw the hints you know I\'m talking about Alison. but yeah they are geting closer to and couple.
if you can make them into and couple that would be fine.

I am glad to see that this was finally updated, please don\'t wait so long next time! A little criticism (constructive I hope) there were numerous spelling errors, I don\'t recall there being any in the first two chappies, so either it was a rushed post or something, but I would be happy to proof read for you if you\'d like, ChefGirlNikki@Aol. I have only seen what was on TechTV of this series so far, and any more isn\'t out on disk yet, so it may not be right to say this, but it seemed to me a touch OOC for Claus, but I can dwithwith that, and since I know there is more I haven\'t seen, I could be really off base. Appologies if I am. Keep up the story though!

Cute! so you really made them kiss and Dio all thinks it and dream I wonder if he\'ll fall asleep after the kiss that would be normal to see if he did...
One Kiss can take away the pain na? someone onced sad. but I wonder what kind of nightmear was it? really evil? like lossing and love one?
I know Dreams are Dream...but they can help people out with emotions lucky they are not locked in the room are they that would be bad...

Cute! so you really made them kiss and Dio all thinks it and dream I wonder if he\'ll fall asleep after the kiss that would be normal to see if he did...
One Kiss can take away the pain na? someone onced sad. but I wonder what kind of nightmear was it? really evil? like lossing and love one?
I know Dreams are Dream...but they can help people out with emotions lucky they are not locked in the room are they that would be bad...

Cute...kind of sad kind of serious.

Well I just found out that they are going to have it out on dvd...the final one going to be out on...6/8/2004, yep that what it says...
the Final Ep of LE maybe they hold the clue on why they taken it off but you did and good job on it! they kissed! so cute!
But it would be bad if someone walks in on them if they go too fair...but I don\'t they are *That* Fair yet right? but geting there.