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for Twice Bitten Thrice Shy

by Johnnyjosh

person Chirella
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
K...*sniff* hurry - This is a great fic and I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter...but take your time...and hurry! LOL =)
person EmaroldHeart
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you haven't streached my patients out yet. I love the fic and I"ll wait for you to finish it. Anyways I really love it and can't wait to see how all of them get together. Please update soon!
EmaroldHeart (AKA Fluff, or Yokimi or Shonamete) if I reveiwed earlier then I may have used one of these names.
person Fluff
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the new chapter!! Sorry that I didn\'t review earlier but it\'s great like always! So what is going to happen?? You have to update soon pretty Please!!
person Chirella
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read chappy 4 again & I think all the characters are portrayed in a splendid manner. I can totally see Shiryu\'s fear and attitude issues - heck - Ikki beat him up just like he thought he would in the first place!!! I just wanted to let you know I think you\'re doing a great job with them. =)
*clapping loudly*
person Hiso chan
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter. It took you forever to get this one out. Come on, come on, get more HyogaxShun in there. ^^
person inulover28
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yea! you finally updated! ^_^ that was a great chappie!, and a long one! poor little shun ;_; well please update soon don\'t make us wait that long again, onegai? o-key well

ja ne till the next chap.
person Chirella
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Thanks for undating, I squealed with delight when I saw the new chapter!!!!!!!!
Now you have me sitting on the edge of my seat again! Drat! =) **paces nervously**un nun needs some love...they all need some love *wail*
Great chapter, well worth the wait...i\'m rambling now...keep up the good work!!!
person DarkSinistra
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I want to know what happens next!! As a Shiryu fan, I do think you write him a bit cold, like Hyoga said, but let\'s see what happens next. Could it be he has something going on with Mu? : ) Please don\'t take as long with next chapter.
person Chirella
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I need my fix, update - update!!! LOL This story is really good. =)
I tease, take your time.
person Nina
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really great story. Very well written (pat yourself on your back). Now, you just need to update so I don\'t have to track you down and tie your fingers to your keyboard, OK.

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