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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start! I look forward to reading more
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh damn.....Damn.....Dammmmmnnnn!! When\'s Chapter 2 Coming out??? I like this fic!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really nice first chapter, but please, don\'t stop!!!!!!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kindan ann and Robin are kinda OOC... But it has me intrigued! I want to know what happens!!!! (duh, what else SHOULD happen? ;) )
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was expecting a longer hunt, but i\'m dying for the next instalment. Update ASAP THANK YOU
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far I can\'t wait to reare. re. I kinda feel sorry for the pcrazcrazied Amon.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful story, and I loved how you portrayed Amon--wild. lol. Keep up the unparalleled talented work!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, your story is amazing, I think you\'re doing a really good job writing this fan fiction. I can\'t wait to read more, so please update soon!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was very beautiful, you should write more. Never stop creating stories this one was Excellent.