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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i DON\'T GET TIRED OF READING THIS. heh. -_-;.. not my fault.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this fic...i think that u did such a great job at figuering out what was the matter and much more..i love ur writting..^__^
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!.. there was a filipino in ur fic.. IM A FILIPINO!!.. THAT MADE MY DAY.. bedsied that.. the fic was amazing..
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOX
KAYLA
pS I put my thick, (sadly batteryless) electric toothbrush to work during this fic!!! (and not on my teeth *wink*
KAYLA
pS I put my thick, (sadly batteryless) electric toothbrush to work during this fic!!! (and not on my teeth *wink*
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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do your readers a favor. If you insist on using the fangirl japanese that makes you look like a know-it-all fourteen year old, kindly put a fucking translation before you start the chapter so the reader knows what the hell one character is saying to another. Unlike you, the majority of us do not have babbelfish on our favorites list and frankly, do you know how annoying it would be if we had to look up a word every time you use it? It breaks the flow of your story and defeats it. Grow up.
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness. Only one thing could make this fic better: an epilogue with Dee (or Ryo) waking up in the middle of the night with an \"inconvenience\" and Dee insisting that it be taken care of right away. Not a whole scene, just the beginning with Dee remembering the night that started it all as he presses Ryo into the bed. And then the end.
But that\'s just me. I dunno, seems like it\'d bring more closure to the story but hey, you\'re the boss.
But that\'s just me. I dunno, seems like it\'d bring more closure to the story but hey, you\'re the boss.
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, YEESSSS!!!!! I just love Dee getting all aggressive and just fucking Ryos brains off. That is the way it should be. Hawt, absolutely hawt. And well written stuff, so big thanks to you. Even though stories like this are the reason I\'m absolutely addicted to fanfics...
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey
IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCUTE THE LAST CHAPTER. Sorry no better word to descibe it and who doesn't love a smut fest chapter sometimes lol. I wish I could write like that wahhh. Anyway I loved it and gotta go look at more of your fics hehe.
IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOCUTE THE LAST CHAPTER. Sorry no better word to descibe it and who doesn't love a smut fest chapter sometimes lol. I wish I could write like that wahhh. Anyway I loved it and gotta go look at more of your fics hehe.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I THOUGHT I had written a review for this, but when I read down the reviews I\'m not there @_@! I feel terrible! Because I\'ve read this story about three times now, and I LOVED it! Ryo kind of reminds me of me. Kind of waits to be more encouraged...umm...so to speak. Anyway sorry about a review sooner. I think you should have gotten more of them. Cool how you went to put yourself in there and wound up helping them out. If it\'d been me, I think...well we won\'t go there... Anyway, greab...b....
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s pretty good. I generally don\'t like OCs, but you made her so inconspicous (god I can\'t spell) that it just pushed the story along instead of distracting you with a Mary Sue. She seemed almost canon, if you\'re going to give an OC that much \'screentime\' make them a little less perfect. Other than that, I congratulate you on a fic well done.