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I liked that - very well written, you have a stream of unconscious thought thing going on there (that's the technical term - and I know 'cause I study english language! *beams*) which makes it more personal and, um, thought-like. I hope you write and post more soon, 'cause I'd really like to hear more. Except...what's with those funny little symbols that appear everywhere? They're not much of a bother, just a little confusing.

Oh please can you update? And is it possible for there to be a mailing list? So that it could be that you coupld alert when you update? x.x I am sorry I am just really liking this story! You did it so well, cause you are so talented.

damn awesome. This is way cool. I hope you post more soon.

Les loves it!! continue biatch!!

Hi I really liked your fanfict I felt you captured the characters quite nicely which is hard to do especially with an anime like Evangelion so please keep writing.PLEASE.

So far so good! Go on!

I love this fic, I hope you will continue. There are some problems with typography, some characters just can\'t be read. But it doesn\'t really spoil the fic. Shinji is cute. I hope you will write all the episode 24 with this POV. :-)

Wow... not bad. I wish more people would right Kaoru (I like it better this way, don\'t you?)XShinji fics. Oh! I also read your lemon fic. Very good as well. ANd um... yeah. That\'s about it I guess...

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as said before, I'm found of your style of writing! Noing ing to say it all over again.. or am I? Ok, original, cool, interesting!
These two chapters don't seem to be anything else besides the descriptions of the anime and your interpretation of Sinji's mind. Liked the musics parts the most, how you linked music to the emptiness in him!
Not sure you noticed it or not, but something happened to the ' and it made reading a lot more confusing, I advise re-posting with normal text. Now, is the story stopped? I honeslty had the idea that you had this one finished when you wrote the other EVA 'story'... nevermind that, I'm just looking forward till next chapter! Just how much of the story are you changing? Honestly the fact that Kaoru is dying won't help much in a story like this will it? So are you changing that or not really? Whatever it comes, i want to read. Don't have any aspects to point out, the story is still beginning and I have no complains reguarding the author and her style, Bai Bai!