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Title \"Gang-Bang On Harry\"
Author name and email – Andrea Vzlashiryu@yahoo.com
Pairing(s) – Lucius/Snape/Harry.
Disclaimer – I did not invent any of the characters in this fanfic.
JK Rowling did. I\'m borrowing them for a little \"fun.\" And I\'m not
making money out of this.
Rating – NC-17
Summary – Harry is kidnapped. He ends up liking the idea of
Lucius/Severus/Harry.
Category(s) – Gang-Bang, slash, PWP?
Warnings – graphic m/m sex.
Author Notes – Oh this idea had been in my head for too long. Finally
I\'ve dared to go kinky.
Any links – www.vzlashiryu.deviantart.com
Spoilers – No spoilers, I\'m a good girl.
Feedback – Let me know if you liked it! Vzlashiryu@yahoo.com

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Harry sat in his Gryffindor dormitory bored to death… He hadn\'t had
much to do in months. Normally in these situations he would indulge
in `adult material\' so he could jerk off till his room-mates showed
up. If he could not get access to either of those things, fantasizing
about Professor Snape normally worked.

Professor Snape… Harry practically drooled as he remembered the sexy
and mysterious outfit his teacher had worn today as usual. He wore
black which fit his personality so very well. Those long robes which
were fitted to his shoulders and tapered at his narrow waist; he
wondered sometimes if they were charmed to swish gracefully and
entrancingly around those long, sensuous legs.

\"God…\" Harry sighed. His feelings for the slender, greasy dark haired
man had grown far beyond student and teacher relationship in the past
few months. Harry had never been able (or dared) to tell Snape how he
felt about him. Rejection and mockery was too much to risk. Besides,
what if he told Snape how he felt and the man never wanted to see him
again? What if Snape was homophobic or something like that? What if
Snape blew off his head?!

…What if Snape gave him head? \"That would never happen, Harry.\" The
Boy Who Lived kept on telling himself over and over.

Harry frowned to himself. It looked like another night of jacking
off. Why could he not be as charismatic as Fred and George? That way,
he\'d get all the orgasms he needed. But he was not charismatic and
was also a little on the shy side. Oh well, no sex for Harry…

Just as Harry was about to pull off his robes and unzip his trousers,
a knock came at the door of his room. He blinked rather surprised and
a little annoyed that someone would dare disturb his private time.

\"What?\" He called out, forcing the annoyed sound in his voice down to
an almost undetectable strain. Six years at Hogwarts had taught him
well. The door opened to reveal Professor Snape, which did wonders
for Harry\'s frustration that was beginning to throb. \"Prof- Professor
Snape?\" Ha blinked several times to make sure he was not dreaming.

\"Hello Harry,\" Snape\'s lips curved into a smirk, stepping towards the
boy. He had a look in those mid-night black eyes which Harry had
never seen there before.

Harry glanced behind Snape as movement caught his eye. Lucius Malfoy
stood there blocking the doorway. \"You do not at all seem to be busy
Mr. Potter.\" The blonde\'s silken venomous voice said while the lips
smirked.

The boy blushed. What did he mean by `busy?\' Professor Snape was
moving behind him, but Harry did not really care. At least… not until
he felt a sharp pain shoot to the back of his head. Of course, by
then it was too late. He was unconscious.

*****

\"I think he is coming around.\"

\"Hmm…\"

\"W- What?\" Harry groaned. His head pounded. He tried to bring his
hands to his forehead to stop the pain with a little pressure.
Quickly he found out that his wrists were bound, which prevented much
movement in the first place. His eyes flew open as he looked up.

His wrists were cuffed together to a luxurious mahogany headboard. It
did not take Harry long to realize that his ankles were spread-eagled
to the bed posts at his feet. He swallowed and slowly brought his
head down to see who his captors were.

Professor Snape sat on the bed by Harry and gently brushed the dark
bangs from his eyes. \"You are finally awake I see. We were about to
give up and find someone else.

Mr. Malfoy smirked and sat on his other side, giving Harry yet
another reason to be afraid. He tried desperately to press himself
against the silky green sheets of the mattress as though it could
swallow him up and spit him back out in his dormitory, safe and
sound.

Above Harry, Snape and Malfoy glanced at each other. Harry stared in
amazement as the two men leaned in and pressed their lips together,
giving the boy a mesmerizing and sexy display of wet entwining
tongues.

Harry watched transfixed while Malfoy ravaged Snape\'s mouth, both
enjoying and being confused by what he saw. It was positively the
sexiest thing he had ever seen. Malfoy\'s mouth pressed against
Snape\'s. The dark haired man caressed Malfoy\'s tongue with his own
before it was thrust back into his mouth. Professor Snape moaned
softly and stroked Harry\'s rising, throbbing, leaking dick.

It was Mr. Malfoy who broke the kiss, finishing with a wet swipe
across his teacher\'s lips. Snape smiled and he could feel the dark
man\'s hand sliding into his own.

\"Let us undress him…\" suggested Lucius Malfoy delicately, running an
arrant finger up and down Harry\'s chest slowly. Harry whimpered and
shied away from the finger as best he could, which was not saying
much.

Both men chuckled at Harry\'s sudden fear of them. Snape smiled and
bent, kissing Harry\'s scar and then down to his nose. Finally, the
Potions Master pressed his lips forcefully against the boys\' bruising
the soft flesh there.

Harry whimpered more, this time from the pain of Professor Snape\'s
kiss. It made his lips ache, but at the same time it felt good. He
found himself kissing back. He was beginning to tremble.

Meanwhile, Malfoy was slipping an elegant cold-fingered hand up the
boy\'s baggy shirt, running it over Harry\'s smooth stomach gently. He
slid his hands upward to brush `accidentally\' across a pink nipple.

Harry gasped from the sudden shock of pleasure. Snape smirked and
took the chance to plunge his wet tongue into the boy\'s open mouth.
He was met with a squirming tongue, too tentative and timid to press
back against his own.

\"Mmn!\" Harry moaned into the kiss. Mr. Malfoy\'s evil, evil fingers
were dancing over one erect nipple playfully as Harry\'s shirt was now
pressed up against his chin, leaving his hairless chest and stomach
totally bare.

Professor Snape moved and lay partially atop Harry\'s small boyish
body. He pressed those sinful lips against a single nipple, and then
flicked his tongue over the hardening pink nub. He continued teasing
the tiny bit of fleshy desire before finally enveloping it in his
lips to suckle as it if were the sweetest of treats.

\"Malfoy!\" The boy gasped, arching his back. It felt good, and Harry
could feel quick bolts of pleasured lightning run from the top of his
head to the tips of his toes and then back to his cock, exiting him
further. The Potions Master sat back, watching for a moment. The
child in underneath him was so beautiful, so breathtakingly arousing;
with his lapping fear and precious little sounds of ecstasy, oh he
wanted to fuck him badly. He stared down at the untouched nipple on
Harry\'s left breast, the side he just happened to be on. He smiled to
himself and lay down and began to unhurriedly torture the pink flesh
there.

\"Ahhhhh!\" Harry was writhing with the pleasure the two older men were
giving him. Lucius Malfoy\'s lips were working around his right nipple
and causing a delicious suction; Snape\'s tongue was moving in slow
circles. Mr. Malfoy began to play gently with Harry\'s navel.

Harry was practically purring whenever either of the older men even
accidentally touched something as innocent as his neck. \"So
sensitive! Oh, good boy…\" He heard his professor say.

\"Oh Professor! M-Mr… ah! Luscius!\" Harry was in heaven. Snape\'s hand
was unzipping his trousers while pulling out his erection. Malfoy
could not help the temptation and slipped a practiced hand underneath
Harry to fondle his ass a little roughly.

Professor Snape continued lapping at Harry\'s rock-hard nipple, using
his hand to rub something else which was also rock-hard by now. He
was looking forward to satifying the heated flesh there.
Mr. Malfoy glanced down. Damn… Severus had already taken care of that
part. Oh well, that meant he still had the rest of Harry to play
with. He slipped his tongue into they boy\'s ear mischievously, making
little circles with his elegant fingertips on Harry\'s sensitive neck.

Harry shuttered with excitement. Not only was his obsession Professor
Severus Snape touching and fondling his dick, but he also had
beautiful Lucius Malfoy messing round with him too. It was most
certainly a good day.

\"Harry…\" Lucius whispered making sure his silken voice sounded as
sensual as possible.

The boy looked up, eyelids lowered in lusty passion.

\"You are aware that you have got to do some work as well, Mr.
Potter.\" The fingers on his neck were now massaging his Adam\'s apple
in the most provocative and devious motions.

Harry smirked a little. \"I\'m tied up Mr. Malfoy. There is not much
that I can do--\"

\"That is what flexibility is for.\" Malfoy grunted deliciously and
shifted, moving so that his pelvis was pressed up against Harry\'s
cheek.

Harry obediently nuzzled at Malfoy\'s hard cock through the material
of his robes. He felt one of the older man\'s gorgeous hands moving
through his hair slowly and watched the other riding the man from his
robes and unzipping his trousers, bringing out his erection.

The boy darted his tongue out over the very tip of Malfoy\'s cock. He
dipped it into the man\'s piss-hole, tasting the succulent salty pre-
cum there. He teased Malfoy by slipping his mouth over the throbbing
head and sucking hard, then pulling away just before the blonde tried
thrusting deeper.

\"Do. Not. Tempt. Me. Mr. Potter!\" Lucius groaned.

\"It is too early for ejaculation, Lucius.\" Professor Snape smirked.
Malfoy raised an eyebrow and stared at the greasy haired man for a
moment before suddenly having his attention yanked back to Harry as
the beautiful boy engulfed his dick.

\"Oh Merlin! Oh velvety ecstasy,\" he gasped. He could feel Harry\'s
throat muscles at the head of his cock swallowing to trick Harry\'s
gag reflex. \"Oh fuck…\" His voice no longer made words. In their place
were lascivious sounds to pervert even God\'s most celibate angels.

Harry sucked forcefully at the base of Lucius\' massive cock. He may
have been the one tied up, but he was going to at least have some
control over this situation. He pulled back a little and let Malfoy
thrust into his mouth, enjoying the tingling sensation in his lips.

Mr. Malfoy groaned as Harry opened his throat to him, practically
begging to be ravaged.

Between Harry\'s legs, Snape was feeling a little jealous. It was not
fair that Malfoy should be capturing Harry\'s attention like this. He
grinned to himself and moved up a little, nuzzling at the skin just
below Harry\'s balls. The smell of young exited male flesh was ever
more powerful there. The man felt intoxicated with pleasure. He took
one sweet morsel into his mouth and began sucking and nibbling it
gently.

Harry let out a muffled cry of delight. Out of all the fantasies he
had ever had of his teacher, he always adored the ones where Snape
sucked on his cock and balls all night long the most.

The Potions Master released Harry\'s sack and smirked. \"You like that
Mr. Potter? You are most sweet there.\" He reached up and rubbed t the
very tip of Harry\'s weeping dick. \"Should I taste this?\"

\"Severus, damn it! Just suck his cock… I want something to watch from
up here,\" Malfoy growled while still thrusting into Harry\'s wet
mouth. The boy would have agreed with the long-haired man if it had
not been for the dick currently down his throat.

Snape nodded in agreement and grabbed the base of Harry\'s dick in his
hand. He lifted it higher than it already was and began licking
slowly up and down the bottom part.

The boy trashed his bound hands and moaned, enjoying the heat pooling
in between his legs.

\"That does not mean you can slack off, Mr. Potter.\" Lucius tugged
gently on Harry\'s hair. The boy glanced up at him and amusement
twinkled in his eyes briefly. He stuck out his pink tongue and lapped
up a small string of pre-cum hanging from the blonde\'s cock. \"Much
better, good boy. Good boy.\"

Harry nodded ant took the throbbing dick into his mouth again. Malfoy
pressed his fingers into the back of Harry\'s head, holding him still
while he thrust. Harry found himself wishing his hands were untied so
he could do the same thing to the succulent man in between his legs.

Malfoy\'s thrusts were speeding up, Harry noticed suddenly. He also
realized that he wanted to taste the warm creamy liquid that was
already teasing his tongue. The man groaned aloud as he pushed his
cock a little harder into that pink mouth. He could feel his balls
beginning to tighten, a warning that he was ready to ejaculate. The
heat there began to travel up his dick and a strange dizziness rushed
to his head. He was near, so very fucking near!

Harry pulled away.

\"AHH!\" The blonde hissed. He had been so close.
Snape paused from what he was doing to Harry for a moment to give
Malfoy an amused glance. \"See?\"

\"WHAT?!\" The other man frowned.

\"He agrees, sir. We have all night to fuck around. Do not come so
quickly.\"

Malfoy\'s temper was cooling down. He raised a thin elegant eyebrow
with a little amusement in his fine features. \"Was there not a
spanking originally planned for out young lover?\"

Harry blushed, he felt his erection twitch with excitement. A
spanking? \"Huh?\" He blinked.

\"Yes I believe that was in the agenda…\" Snape sat up and opened a
drawer in the bedside table.

\"Wait a minute, I--\" Harry started. Malfoy pressed two fingers
against his lips.

\"Shhh…\" he smirked with malice. \"You shall enjoy it, I promise
dearest.\" Lucius winked at the boy, who squirmed a little.

\"Here are the keys, Lucius.\" Snape grinned. He held them up to the
blonde man. Malfoy took the keys and leaned over Harry. He watched
Professor Snape from the corner of his eye as the Potions Master
pulled two more keys out for the handcuffs that were pinning Harry\'s
feet down.

\"Wait,\" Harry yelped. \"I can deal with sex and blow jobs and the
kissing, but isn\'t a spanking a little kinky?\"

\"And bondage orgies are not?\" Mr. Malfoy questioned him, mockery in
his silken voice. Harry blushed a little.

\"Just calm down, Harry. We won\'t hurt you.\" Snape patted his cheek.
He finished freeing Harry\'s feet. \"Flip him over.\"

\"No wait!\" But he was already flipped onto his stomach. He was
handcuffed again almost immediately. \"Hold on, I don\'t think I want
to do this!\"

Malfoy shook his head. \"Does not matter to us whether you want it or
not.\"

That single sentence made Harry\'s heart skip a beat. He was
officially scared out of his wits. He whimpered trying to gain some
control and show some courage.

\"Shhh…\" Snape smiled and stroked his hair and cheek lightly. \"This is
your dream com true is it not Mr. Potter? Do you think I have not
noticed the way you stare at me all the time?\"

Harry blushed deeply. Had he been that obvious?

\"You have a nice ass; do you no think so Lucius?\" The older man
grinned and squeezed one round, smooth, perfect globe.

\"A precious ass indeed.\" Malfoy leaned down, holding his long silky
blonde hair with one hand as he closed his eyes and kissed the other
naked cheek gently. Then he licked it suggestively.

\"Nn…\" Harry whimpered again in spite of his effort to remain calm. He
continued letting out small sounds of protest as the two older men
fondled and molested him, but he was ignored.

The Potions Master raised his had and slapped Harry\'s ass hard,
drawing a yelp of surprise from the youth\'s throat.

\"Shut up Potter!\" Malfoy sneered in his ear.

Snape slapping the two globes, never hitting the same place twice. He
did not stop until Harry\'s thighs, ass and a little of his back were
red.

\"Damn Severus!\" Malfoy muttered. Snape looked up to seen the
beautiful blonde man going through his bedside-table drawers.

Harry\'s ass was slapped again.

\"You never told me about all the nice toys you have got in there…\"

\"That gives me an idea. Pull out the dildo and the lube.\"

\"No!\" Harry gasped, earning him another slap on the rear.

\"You\'ll speak when you are spoken to!\" Snape growled.

\"Here,\" Malfoy handed the dildo to Snape, then a small tube of
lubrication jelly. Snape licked his lips lasciviously as he coated
the ten inch long pleasure toy with jelly, his inky black eyes
sparkled with anticipation.

\"You will like this Potter… It is nice and long. Thick as well.\" He
chuckled. \"But first, we will have to get you ready for it…\"

Harry bit his lower lip hard enough to draw blood as he felt the
Potion Master\'s long skilled fingers dancing over his tight pulsating
love-hole. Tears came to his eyes as one single jelly-coated digit
was forced into sweet virgin\'s body and began thrusting hard. He
finally cried out begging his teacher to stop. It hurt, oh it hurt so
much.

\"Shhhh…\" Lucius stroked Harry\'s flushed ass cheeks gently,
alternating between right and then left. \"It will feel good soon.\"

\"Will you do the honors Lucius?\" Snape smirked barely containing his
pleasure at the provocative sight underneath him. He held up the
lubricated dildo.

Mr. Malfoy nodded eagerly and took the toy from him. \"Naturally.\" He
positioned himself between Harry\'s legs. \"I suggest you brace
yourself, Mr. Potter. This might hurt.\"

\"Mr. Malfoy, don\'t!\" Harry yelped.

Malfoy ignored him and rammed the huge dildo into Harry\'s tight
little ass.

\"Ahhh! Ah! Ah! Ahhh!\" Harry screamed while Mr. Malfoy pumped the toy
into him. Professor Snape began to stroke his own cock while he
watched Harry being raped by the ten-inch long pleasure toy.

\"Lucius stop for a minute.\" He hissed into the blonde\'s ear who
pulled the dildo out of Harry\'s ass and the child let out a sigh of
relief.

\"Here.\" Snape reached into the drawers and pulled a different
vibrator out. It was a long plastic tube from which a wire extended
that was attached from to a small black bar with a few buttons on it.
The Potions Master leaned over and stroked Malfoy\'s twitching dick,
then pushed the vibrator onto it. \"You will love this.\" He kissed the
blonde man on the lips and pressed the button to make it buzz.

\"Ahhh! Oh, fuck! Fuck, fuck, fuck!\" Lucius was screaming. \"Merlin
that\'s so good!\"

\"I know.\" Snape smiled. He reached over and turned Harry\'s face
towards him, then kisses his cheek gently. \"Poor Harry…\" he muttered,
erasing Harry\'s tears with his thumb gently. \"Why do we not let
Lucius play with his new toy, and I will play with you?\"

Harry whimpered in response. Malfoy leaned against the foot-board of
the bed, gripping the vibrator and moaning. Harry glanced at him
briefly. \"What are you going to do, Professor?\" He whispered the way
a little scared child would.

\"Fuck you.\" Snape smiled. Harry blushed deeply and bit his lip.
Professor Snape noticed how red it was and he longed to suck on that
luxurious lip. He bent down and sucked on it gently making the boy
underneath him gasp. \"Do not be frightened, dearest. I\'ll be gentler
than Lucius… Shhh… That\'s it. Relax.\" He nuzzled the boy\'s flushed
cheeks.

Now that Lucius Malfoy was distracted, Snape could fuck Harry easily.
He kept control of the console to the vibrator. \"Lucius, would you
like to watch me shag Potter?\"

\"Oh yes. Fuck him hard… Severus,\" he was panting by now.

\"I plan to.\" Snape smiled and brought his pulsing cock to Harry\'s
entrance pushing in carefully. \"Mmn…\" he moaned softly.

\"Se—Severus! Ah!\" He whimpered. Oddly, the dildo had turned him on
beyond recognition and now he wanted that fullness to fill him
again. He wanted Professor Snape to caress his ass from the inside
out with his cock. \"Fuck me, professor,\" he pleaded.

For the first time since he had met Harry, the Potions Master was
willing to give the boy exactly what he wanted. He smirked and shoved
his cock the rest of the way into Harry\'s tight little ass, turning
the vibrator speed up. He held on to Harry\'s boyish hips while he
rammed into their velvety insides.

\"Yes, fuck me hard, Severus!\" Hearing the boy screaming such wanton
obscenities made Snape\'s dick twitch on the border of pain.

Lucius stared at the pair fucking and pulled the vibrator off
quietly. Professor Snape\'s ass was right in front of him, and he
wasn\'t letting this opportunity go to waste. If that sexy bastard
thought he could get away without getting Malfoy\'s dick shoved up his
ass tonight, he was oh so very wrong.

Snape made a delicious sound somewhere between pain and pleasure as
he felt Lucius\' huge cock penetrating his ass. He spread his legs a
little more for the blonde, even tough he never really enjoyed sex
with Lucius Malfoy. The man was just too damn rough.

Malfoy began pounding Snape\'s ass, forcing the dark haired man deeper
into Harry, who did not seem to mind at all.

Harry bit his lower lip to hold back the screams of pleasure as his
ass was fucked. He was being pounded into the bed, and could feel
himself beginning to tense in orgasm.

\"Oh shit! I- I\'m gonna fucking cum. Severus! Oh there right there!
Severus, ahh!\" The boy cried out as his vision blurred into nothing
but pure white hot pleasure.

Harry sighed and let go of his wasted cock… That had definitely been
one hell of a good fantasy.

******
(Well, was that not a nice little trip into Harry\'s mind? Me thinks
it was!)

u are ebil! but not as ebil as mi!!! you coulda done it so that aya and yohji "forget" about it all and don't say a thing MWUAHAHAHHA -cough- neways!!!! sooo good!!! and i love it!!!! you are a good author!!!!

It was hot...and humurous at the same time. And, damn it, I really thought they were actually going at it! It was hot though, that Ken\'s got a dirty mind. A dirty...dirty....dirty mind! Just the way Ie ite it!

J3

Criticism: It happened a little fast, I personally perfer fics with long detail. And also, none of them were very much in character. Ken\'s mood changes also bothered me slightly, He wanted it, didn\'t, and wanted it. Maybe you could explain their thoughts a little more?

Well I *did* love it. Hehe. Specifically the concept of it all. And I don\'t normally see fun stuff with \'toys\' in the Weiß section so bonus points.

Dear Ken,

I own you, dumbass. Remember? Just for that, you\'re not getting fed for a week.

Love,
The Doctor

How the hell do you know about my fantasy\'s?!
You stalker!

More more i whant some more he said hed did it more ten once.

lol, it would be an understatement to say i liked this! Anyway great job! :)