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person Shadowhawk
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is flowing. It makes you feel like you're one of them in the mist of everything. I hope that you would continue. Can hardly wait to know what happen in those two years and afterward. Best wishes!
person Megan Consoer
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Robin
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice fic! keep going!
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters.
person shaid
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s good so far. More please?
person Jai
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WRITE MORE, or I will KILL! No I won\'t, I just am in a bad mood. I ran out of ramen noodles! *sob*
person voleur du coeur
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Runs around chanting*
Sakaki\'s gonna be in trouble! Sakaki\'s gonna be in trouble!
Hehehehehehe...
Anyhow, good start for the story. I can\'t wait to read the rest of it. The only thing I can seem to notice is that Amon is a little out of character, other than that, good going.
person Pan-Chan42 (from ff.net)
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start. Can\'t wait till the next chapter is put out. I love smutt. So BRING IT...NETHING YOU DISH OUT I CAN TAKE!
person Shiro Ryu
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far so good! I look forward to seeing where you take this!

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