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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Flippin\' God!!! How hot was that.... Wow!! Definetly continue with the story! I\'m really enjoying your work, looking forword to reading more!!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! sorry, being a little too extatic. I think that\'s how you spell extatic... let me find a dictionary... WAIT back to the review. It was a wonderful story, write another, you\'re good.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the second of your stories I have read, and the first I have reviewed.
Both are good, with very well thought out premises.
I have only one quibble with how you write. I can\'t tell were your characters are talking, and where they are doing things. My suggestion: Learn the fine art of using quotation marks. They exist to put around things that people are saying, and they make things infiniatly clearer.
Both are good, with very well thought out premises.
I have only one quibble with how you write. I can\'t tell were your characters are talking, and where they are doing things. My suggestion: Learn the fine art of using quotation marks. They exist to put around things that people are saying, and they make things infiniatly clearer.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhh its wonderful continue please please!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Just beautiful.