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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty twisted. Some decent imagery. I like the added element of the woman. You repeat yourself too much though, and you drag it out far too long. It lacks a strong, original writing style. This is true of most fanfics, it\'s not just you. I\'m just telling you so maybe you can make your writing better and write some truly blow-me-away Trigun fics :)
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am insanley in love with any KxV type stories. Not only was this a KxV story(duh...), but it was well-written. I really loved it.
I have a question about the story, though. Was it a one-shot or will there be more chapters?
I have a question about the story, though. Was it a one-shot or will there be more chapters?
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really rather desturbing but then oddly very hot. Knives is truly very much insane (good going ^-^) and poor Vash I hate and love him hurting (just not sure which I like best, love Vash though always)
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic! email me at digitalmeowmix@msn.com
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this was absolutly amazing. So beautifuly writen. *really bad at writing reviews* wonderful.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After I read this fanfic, all I can think of was, \"Damn.\" This fanfic almost gave me a nosebleed! I mean...this was the most Coldhearted Knives I seen yet! Even more twisted than the anime one! Actually, he acted more like the anime one without restrictions than the manga one, but still I liked the fic all the same though, since its hard to find Knives/Vash/Knives fanfics XD
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww... don\'t let that be your last fanfic! It was rather good. OK, it needed some polishing here and there, occasionally the perspective was a bit off and I wasn\'t sure where it was cominom, om, but other than that it was really good. I liked dark fics and this was fun, so please, keep on writing! And thank you for sharing this... interesting and disturbine piece with us!
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
VashWhumping!
<3. I am so cruel to those I love.
*ahem*
Just. Er. WOW. Very, very very vivid imagery here. I found this disturbing to the tee, I think you got Knives personality spot-on. I just. Er. WOW.
No words. *boom*
Kudos. Kudos.
<3. I am so cruel to those I love.
*ahem*
Just. Er. WOW. Very, very very vivid imagery here. I found this disturbing to the tee, I think you got Knives personality spot-on. I just. Er. WOW.
No words. *boom*
Kudos. Kudos.
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bleep* It ate my bleepin\' review. None the less, I really, really liked it. It was disturbing and perfectly so. So vivid. So descriptive. Yatta. Awesomeness.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job, you did, Rasp. :B Esplly lly for your first one. :: Gives her pocky. :: IT\'S GOOD, READ IT YOU NINNIES!