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May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea and characters here, but the pacing needs a lot of work. It seems really odd/rushed, at the moment.
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July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry Gary, I am working on a new chapter, but with my work hours I have no time to write. I\'ll get it done soon, I promise.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why the hell haven\'t you wrote more? If you don\'t write more, I will finish the story for you and averyone will die torturous deaths
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soon, my 4th chapter is about finished. It\'ll probably be updated in the next few days.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to updat this again?
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty funny, I know you have more to come so get off your ass and WRITE!