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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! DUDE THAT WAZ COOL!!!~no more soda for meh~ I realy liked it. i printed it out and brought it to school to show EVERYONE! :D
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee that wsa great, I love how you make theeableable crazy bastard that is Alex seem so vulnerable. And yes, I had noticed the bit in ep 7 (the bit right after Alucard tells Alex that he\'s \"fun\"?), though not the other one. And now I am off to read the sequel *grins fangirlishly*
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, maybe there are indeed some plot mistakes BUT AxA is realy IMPOSSIBLE to find \'round the web! I am TIRED of looking for it, so HUGE THANK YOU for this fic and \"To Pay the Piper\" - such people like you, VelvetBlood ( Amoire ab hostis , Daste of darkness) and Dogwitch (Fall From Grace) really provide a salvation for AxA fans. BTW do you know any links to AxA pictures? Well, i do have some pics, but...but that\'s not enough ^^\" (i can share them if you want)
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOWZA!! That was so HOT! *pants and tries to calm down* I\'m really eager to read more!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Since you actual ask for (and I\'m assuming, appreciate) constructive criticism...
A few technical points:
\"dying\"-- watch that one; it\'s misspelled a few times.
And you did a lot of repitition-- you used the same word several times in a short space of time-- and there were a few places that the word choice made me wonder... \"moronic\" was one of them. ^_^
Plot, characterization, etc:
Mmm... I would have liked a bit more of Anderson\'s motivation, even if it\'s just a sentence or two. I mean, he seems really fanatical in the anime and manga, so it\'s really hard to get him into this position-- heh-- without a lot of explaination and motivation. But it\'s not impossible to do. In the manga, it\'s clear that they respect each other and that they love playing with one another, and even understand one another to a certain degree, and it would be real easy to throw a few more hints of that into this story.
Other than that, this was cool! Thanks for posting it for the rest of us. (I\'m always up for AxA... Yum!) I\'m looking forward to the next part/story; get writing! ^_~
And if you want a beta reader I\'d be more than willing to help out-- just drop me an email.
A few technical points:
\"dying\"-- watch that one; it\'s misspelled a few times.
And you did a lot of repitition-- you used the same word several times in a short space of time-- and there were a few places that the word choice made me wonder... \"moronic\" was one of them. ^_^
Plot, characterization, etc:
Mmm... I would have liked a bit more of Anderson\'s motivation, even if it\'s just a sentence or two. I mean, he seems really fanatical in the anime and manga, so it\'s really hard to get him into this position-- heh-- without a lot of explaination and motivation. But it\'s not impossible to do. In the manga, it\'s clear that they respect each other and that they love playing with one another, and even understand one another to a certain degree, and it would be real easy to throw a few more hints of that into this story.
Other than that, this was cool! Thanks for posting it for the rest of us. (I\'m always up for AxA... Yum!) I\'m looking forward to the next part/story; get writing! ^_~
And if you want a beta reader I\'d be more than willing to help out-- just drop me an email.