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by Boof

person Calypso Ravanna
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute and interesting enough for me to probably continue the story. :)
person Vladimir
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One of the best WHR lemons on this site. I enthusiastically await the climax... in more ways than one.
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I got a bit confused somewhere along the lines...
person Vladimir
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellently written... now you just have to take it to its logical conclusion. Ahem.
person Liz
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. Much better writing than you usually find in fanfic. And it\'s got everything; the scene where Haruto makes his bet with Michael was hilarious, his guilt later was touching, and the attraction between them is getting interesting. I hope you continue this fic!
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that this is a really well written story. The characters have really nice development, which surprised me greatly. ^^ Please keep up the good work. I really appreciate being able to read something of this quality. Thank you~!
person Chirella
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more, write more, write more! Sakaki is too cute~Awwww.
person orlandosgirl
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s cool that you updated i the the story so far ket got going
person iJ3i
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff!
person pinky01
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow wow wow. that was amazying. that was the first michael masterbation fic and the first michaelxharuto fic that i have ever read.that was just marvlous work your work inspired me to make a anime male masterbation fanfic archive. and hope to have your story as one of the very first fics.bravo and long live yaoi

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