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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! That\'s all I can really say about it! good work!
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March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To Anon:
I see what you mean with the actual meaning of the word, but I though words in poetry had their own meaning to the author. I like the succumb...to me it meant to fall or befallen. The title basically meant what result will \'befall\' upon Shinta to become a man. Succumbed really means befallen, happened upon, chanced, turned out for....see what I\'m getting at. Succumb has more than one meaning which is my point..first point actually. The thesaurus can be a writer\'s best friend. Second point not to sound, nasty, mean, ignorant or bitchy \'cause I love opinions...sometimes, but poetry at least I was told for years and years and years is suppose to have meaning for the author not for the readers.
Just my opinion...
I see what you mean with the actual meaning of the word, but I though words in poetry had their own meaning to the author. I like the succumb...to me it meant to fall or befallen. The title basically meant what result will \'befall\' upon Shinta to become a man. Succumbed really means befallen, happened upon, chanced, turned out for....see what I\'m getting at. Succumb has more than one meaning which is my point..first point actually. The thesaurus can be a writer\'s best friend. Second point not to sound, nasty, mean, ignorant or bitchy \'cause I love opinions...sometimes, but poetry at least I was told for years and years and years is suppose to have meaning for the author not for the readers.
Just my opinion...
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am forever a fan, dear one. And I am always in awe of
the beauty that comes out of your head.
Tsuki-san
the beauty that comes out of your head.
Tsuki-san