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I know this is a long shot... But I'm a huge fan of the ShuichixTohma pairing and I keep seeing people point to your story as a good place to find such. I finally found the story! But I'm not certain whether you've taken it down, or if there's just something wrong. I'll hold onto some hope that maybe it'll be available to read someday, since this is my favorite gravitation pairing. Thank you for writing such an amazing story that other people are blogging about it! :)

I liked that a lot. I love the Tohma X Shuichi pairing. I really liked seeing Shuichi dominate Tohma. I usually rp it the other way around, but that was just beautiful. Great work. If you write more of them, I can't wait to read them. *smiles*

I like the pairing and the story was great, very well done! OH..and hot hot HOT...Touma masterbating is just too hot..LOL.

SeveredWings

I don\'t like Tohma. But I loved this FF.
Tohma jerking off beside Shuichi is still a bit OOC, but ok Tohma is always good for a surprise. The way you throw around with words is amazing, I needed my dictionary ^_^;; (I\'m German)
Good work! d^_^b

Very nice work. A couple that you don\'t see very often, but it was a nice change. And I really love the dynamics of the relationship. You\'re truly a gifted writer, I\'m going to have to check out your other fics as well.

This is very well written, other than I hate that couple...

Everything was going good, everything very well written, and then you threw in that Narnia comparison... CS Lewis is a very strong Christian author, most of all his writings revolve around his religion... The Narnia story is a metaphore for the story of Christ... Aslan is Christ, and the stone table is him dying for the sins of others (centering in on edmond)... *smirks*, so I was reading, and pretending it wasn\'t the couple it was, enjoying the excellent writing, and then I freeze... I lost the enjoyment on the story as I picture a man hanging on a cross so that I can be forgiven for loving shonen ai... forgiven for writing lemons, and reading them... *smirks* I couldn\'t finish the story... *siiiigh* Please, please, please don\'t ever do that again, I love your writing...(ever been professionally published?)

~elfgirl

Whoa... Now /that/ was unusual, to say the least... Now, nit-picks first, I really don\'t think Shuichi can concievably be construed in this fashion, based on the original character. BUT, allowing for liberties taken (it is a fic after all,) WOW! Very intriguing characterizations going on here, very compelling dynamic roles being played. Nice, flavorful prose style, as well. And the Aslan metaphor was just like... \"*blink* Wow, crucifixion metaphor? BIZARRE!\" (Note that isn\'t a bad thing, I always did think that scene in the \"Wardrobe\" book had sexual vibes... Then, I am a little bit kinky... ^_^)

Anywho, in short, great job!

This was very ehm... I think I might need a tissue to dry my mouth now ^_~. I was unfamiliar with the pairing, but I liked it very much. They\'re both just sooo cute! Keep writing, you\'re good.

Well, this is pretty much the firale ale on male story I\'ve read because I\'m not really onto that kind of thing, but your one hell of a writer! I\'m not talking about how you detailed the sexual parts, but how you described true emtion. I sometimes have a hard time doing that! Oh, I\'m jealous! ^-^

Veary intreging pairing. I really did like this fic. It was well writen, and staged. I hope you will contule writing and posting on this sit. I would love to see what else you can come up with. Keep up the great work. Ja ne. ^^