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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee hee... good stuff. The story was well thought out and has an awesome pairing too (Yay... Tasuki/Nuriko are my fave). I liked how you teased the reader at the beginning with the kiss and then left it for a while. On the whole an enjoyable fic... Although I would suggest you go over it and format the paragraphing a bit more. I also noticed a couple spelling mistakes and missing words. But apart from that it is a very good FY fic. keep up the good writing.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vary cute. I want to see more of this parring. Or of Nakago and Tomo. That would be fun.
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I liked it. I don't normally read yaoi, but as far as go, go, yours is one of the better ones. Not to mention they are two of my most favoritest characters from Fushigi Yugi. Go you.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn this fic kicks some serious arse!!! <3
i like the pairing, i like the writing, i like the cum-on-the-face. +gets horny+ XD
keep writing pweez?!
love-
mams
i like the pairing, i like the writing, i like the cum-on-the-face. +gets horny+ XD
keep writing pweez?!
love-
mams
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one word to descibe it: BEAUTIFUL.
i love and want to read more like it!
love-the kitten
i love and want to read more like it!
love-the kitten