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for French Vanilla

by sailormac

person iJ3i
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was white hot... Okay, at first, it was cute, and then the flashback with Sai was so sweet, I almost cried. (I'm way too into this anime, btw, and special moments between Hikaru and Sai always get the waterworks flowing, especially if it's a flashback meaning Sai's already MIA, which breaks my heart just to think about...) Then...it just got hot. And it kept getting hotter. And hotter and hotter. This is one of the best for me, overall, not just for Hikaru No Go. Well, it helps that it is HNG, but...still, a good author should be able to draw you in no matter who their story involves. This was it, and I mean *IT*. As a fellow HNG writer (nothing posted, though) I'm actually a little jealous, but it's a good kind of jealous. And the sexcapades between Hikaru and Akira also made me jealous... And I really want an ice cream now... So I'm jealous three-fold. @.@;

Crap, I'm rambling. That doesn't help! Okay, great story, great idea, great characterizations, great scenes all around, great before-during-after continuity, and great mentioning of sweets! (Sorry about that last one) This is going to stick with me for some time, I know. White hot, A-One all the way! ^____^ Niiiiiiice!

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person Go Stone
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked hot! Lots of thoughtful goodness. Good going with giving all the background along the way. Some authors just keep going and going and don\'t tell you anything about anything else but the sex. Major plus! And did I forget to mention that this was wicked hot?? ::goes off to drink some coffee:: Like I need more caffeine...
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. . . I\'m all floaty. Thanks!
person Shorty*
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another lovely story. Apparently, I've inadvertantly read them backwards, as I recall little references from the others. Ah well. I haven't read a bondage one in awhile, and boy was this one good. Although, I'd think that wouldn't make Akira relax... it seemed more as if he was tense from being all worked up... ;)
person Supaa Saiyajin Trinity
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, very nicely done. A++++! ^^

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