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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I love how they beat the heat, very imaginative. The 'uh... oops' scene and when Akira's thought when he just ran into the house were also especially amusing. Nice writing, now I'll just have to check out your other stories...
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. i like this. very hot indeed ;)