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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
May's horny, ahahaha!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jessie used them like they were toys!
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June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In a sense, I don't care if May gets it on with Ash again. As long as it doesn't involve love. Yeah, MayxMisty would seem really nice, you could have Max come in and have a bit of incest! Hahahaha, corrupt their minds, their innocent, young minds, hahahahaha! I'd like to see a really dirty MayxAshxMisty lemon, with Brock watching and getting denied! I love seeing him suffer!
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was good but it should be longer and have a little more detail.(constructive criticizm)
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It could use some detail, and the second chapter was hard to imagen. But otherwise okay for a lemon.
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... It\'s so freaky, it\'s interesting. Updte soon!!!!
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you read this review. i liked the story. you should continue writting this fanfic. bye.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woo go may, that was great hahaha ultra funni
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a good chapter keep up the good work
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September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story for far i want to know what happens after this chapter plez write the next chapter of this story b/c it is very funny how May changed just by seeing Brock and Ash naked.