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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umm... that wasn't even a lemon. Nothing happened between them. I would say it was cute, but it wasn't even that. There was no real fluff...
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh..
trina?!
trina?!
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August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey
i read sumthin\' like this on fanfiction i think it\'s the same story by you
i read sumthin\' like this on fanfiction i think it\'s the same story by you
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the outburst was very unnatural, but before that\'s everything\'s all good, kind of rushed though...
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Plagiarism.
I sread a fic exactly like this in ff.net. Same plot, but this ifc had a few modifications.
Either way, this is totally unoriginal. >.>
The one in ff.net was posted somewhere in early 2003 by a Filipino authoress.
I sread a fic exactly like this in ff.net. Same plot, but this ifc had a few modifications.
Either way, this is totally unoriginal. >.>
The one in ff.net was posted somewhere in early 2003 by a Filipino authoress.
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BASTARD! DAMN YOU! MORE! YOU SHUT IT OFF RIGHT WHEN IT GOT GOOD. ASSHOLE! FINISH THE DAMN FIC!
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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... did you get this fic from somewhere else? Because there's the same fic on ff.net under a different author and a different title. Only with more chapters, this is only the first chapter in that fic.
and to one of the fellow reviewers.. it IS asakura yoh.
and to one of the fellow reviewers.. it IS asakura yoh.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good. =D
Oh, bio1590, I\'m not being rude, but Asakura Yoh is fine. In Japan, sometimes the last name comes before the first name. ^^\'
Oh, bio1590, I\'m not being rude, but Asakura Yoh is fine. In Japan, sometimes the last name comes before the first name. ^^\'
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty good 4 a first time, i have nevr written a lemon fic, EVER in my life, so, i have no idea if mine would be bad or good, anyways, pretty good, hope ya update soon.
~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~
~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
~Let the peacefulness of water be still in your walk in the life ahead...~
~Hªtﮪ-Dªüghtë®_ºf_Wªtë®~
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ermmmmm...good