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for Bathwater

by modernmouse

schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good writing, I liked the style, it's refreshing. Very hot too, of course ;).
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very nice! i liked this a lot! i'm particualrly fond of kowaru's facial expressions. i dunno why. lolz. i like when ppl give him a lil bit of emotion. some ppl avoid it all together. i like that he was concerned for shinji!

great lemon!
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was very cute. I liked it very much for no plot.

-Na
person person
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
squeee, damn cute! *glomps* Ah, young homosexual erotic love. XD Awesome
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :3 This is one of my favorite couplings despite how much I think Shinji is a pansy. I absolutely adore Kaworu and the way you portrayed him. the only problem I had was the spelling, reading your fic several times over and also having another person Beta(edit) is also a very good thing. Other than that, I really enjoyed this <3
person Elk
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...Talk about a EXCELLENT Kaworu/Shinji lemon fic! Nicely done and they\'re definitely in their characters shoes! Sorry I hadn\'t reviewed much earlier, Just saw Evangelion couple of days ago and totally got hooked onto the pairing of Kaworu/Shinji. I hope you\'ll continue to write more Kaworu/Shinji fics, you\'ve really got a great talent! Well, I\'m gonna read the recommend fic you told me at the end!

Til next time,

Elk
person Tannah J
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great! It\'s a rare thing, but you\'ve managed to write an intriguing story about sex without it being smut. Bravo!
person Esty
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww that was soooo sweet ^-^ please please please continue
person Ragna01
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I\'ll check out your other fic too!
person Nelja
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this one, too!
It was very, very cute but quite realistic.

My favourite part :
//I am so fucked up.//
//Please don\'t hurt me.//
//I think I love you.//

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