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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very nice. Short, but sweet. There really aren\'t enough fics with this pairing. ^_^ Good job!
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one; it was more realistic than the usual smutty Kaoru/Shinji fictions... I liked how you portrayed Shinji as confused and disoriented, while being emotionally fragile and lonely! You show much promise as a writer, especially if you can create such underlying conflicts within a character like Shinji-kun. I really don\'t know what else to offer you, in terms of constructive criticism... but then again, fanfiction is not supposed or expected to be like the works of Shakespeare, Dickens, etc. Keep up the good work!
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! And very well written. Good job! :D
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my, this was one deliciously funny, good and exciting fic! I absolutely adored your style, so original, so cute, so fun and.. original. Yes original. Gods I love orginality! The moments with the 3 thoughts at the same time - beautiful! Humm, lemon, I like lemons *look at my name...*, this one was quick but funny -aparently painfull to..., but honeslty I do NOT feel sorry for him.. I mean, Kaworu is an angel... beaut... ... philosophical... CUTE! kaworu... I'll be looking into the other story... definitly...
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hot and wet and all squishy romantic beautiful at the same time. perfect!
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September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude i have not even read ur story nore do i want to because it is gay. i hate fags. u r so fucked up u stupid bitch.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, how pretty! I like it lots!
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very, very, very good, one of the best, if not the most beutiful smut stories I\'ve ever read. Yes, it is possible to have a beautiful smut story. Is it wierd that I wanted it to be dirtier? Oh well, it was still wonderful.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I love your fic! It\'s so hard to find anything with shinjixkaworu or kaworuxshinji (I dont really care!). Very nice! I\'ll look forward to more of your work!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic is beautiful ^^; and if you\'re messed up then so am I...and a lot of other people