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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please do more with this pairing. i love the idea of them together.
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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice ut what happens next
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!
The way you write Hitomi is interesting, and definitely hot. Merle\'s stubborn refusal is even better. Please continue.
The way you write Hitomi is interesting, and definitely hot. Merle\'s stubborn refusal is even better. Please continue.
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was good, the chapters could be longer though...I want to know more, It was out of character sure but still good.
My suggestion would be that you should be more detailed in some places if you know what I mean!!!
GREAT JOB!!!
My suggestion would be that you should be more detailed in some places if you know what I mean!!!
GREAT JOB!!!
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good. very good. please update.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. Yuri can squick me at times, but this was amusing. I like the idea of a lesbian Hitomi...
Can\'t wait fhe Ahe Allen/Van stuff either.
Can\'t wait fhe Ahe Allen/Van stuff either.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Yuri is so rare, it\'s hard not to pay attention to it. Despite the fact I absolutely despise Hitomi, I enjoyed your Merle-Yuri very, very much. ^_____^ Puts me in a mood to write more of it with Cerena! Mm... Merle/Cerena Yuri... Delicious. The only CC I can offer is the swearing. XD Neither swear very much, though I\'m sure one of them would if pissed off enough.