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HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! YOU MUST UPDATE!!!! I LOVE this fic, but you NEED to UPDATE it!!!!! THAT\'S AN ORDER!!!!!!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeease?!!!!! ::puppy eyes::

First thing\'s first. Kid, you have one sick, sick, but undeniably wonderful mind.
Now that that\'s clear, I must also congradulate you on your very well concieved and developed plot. Unlike my ongoing fic (Nature\'s Folly.... not up here yet, but what there is of it so far is up on lil ol fanfiction.net), this fits disturbingly well into the original ongoings. kinda makes you wonder...
Anyway, still need a bit of work on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and all that crap that no one else is going to notice while they\'re wrapped up watching some freakyness going on with Amon... but overall much improvement has been made. Kudos!
Keep up the insanity of the creative mind and don\'t give up. Giving up always comes back and bites you in the ass. *checks behind her own tushie for failed attemts coming back to haunt her*
Zhai\'hai\'elleva!

Good good, another great chapter. Well worth the wait. ^_^ Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Rock on,
Nutmeg

Ah! You updated! That makes me so happy!

Sakaki\'s dealing with things with a lot of anger. Hoo boy! I love the descriptions of him vomiting. And as strange and disgusting it sounds, when he looked into his vomit, realized that Amon\'s semen was mixed in with it, and started to vomit again, it made this story *real*. Not that it wasn\'t *real* before, but just the way that he seemed to notice things that other people might not... I suppose that\'s the way, though, isn\'t it? Something like that happens and it\'s all you\'re able to think about... See, when I vomit (which isn\'t often), I just kind of go, \"Eww, that\'s gross...\" I never actually stop to think about the contents... Ah, but enough about vomit.

I hope the next chapter comes along as nicely as its predecessors! I can\'t wait for the talk between Amon and Sakaki; I\'d love to see some more anger and questions... perhaps reveal a thing or two. ^_^

~Rei~

PS: I think all authors worthy of a great amount of praise should get it. :) I also think that reviewers should be specific about their likes and dislikes, and not come out with the same generic \"great chappie!\" remark. Not that that\'s bad either, of course, ha ha... Write on! I will be eagerly awaiting, no matter how long it takes.

I don\'t know exactly what to say...I can\'t quite bring myself to say I *enjoy* this story...I have anticipated your update, and I\'m...glad (?) to see it, but really, in the context of the story, are those words really appropriate? Again, I feel that your use of realism is excellent...yes, it is a dark, disturbing story...very well written...this story just seems to work its way into the mind, twisting itself through the consciousness....it must be horrid to be on your end, to have the full effect of the story and its creation working through your mind....I know that what I write is distilled from what actually occurs in my mind when I\'m writing...if the same holds true for you, then I\'m truely in awe of your skill and dedication. I....anticipate your next update.

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!! ^. ^ I just LOVE this story...... I seem to have a love of depressing things...I don\'t mean to like them, it just kind of....happens. If the fact that my favorite manga/anime are X/1999 (LOVE, LOVE LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE!!!!!!!!! BUT IT\'S SO SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD!!!!!! MY POOR KAMUI-SAMA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::hysterical crying:: Kamui-sama!!!! ::fangirlness::), Angel Sanctuary(Kato, Katan!!!!!!), and D N Angel(Satoshi!!!!!!!) doesn\'t prove this, I don\'t know what does. -_________-; Anyways! I LOVE this story!!! I think it might be my favorite!!!! ^.^ Which is really saying something considering the fact that I read too many to count... -_________-;(again with this smiley....) It has such a good story plot, and it\'s so thought out.!!!!! Every detail makes sense and every character\'s personality is unwavering, and stays true, always!!!!! Which isn\'t really thought of as difficult, but it can be. I LOVE your writing style and I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE how long you make your chapters!!!!!!!!! GO LONG CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!! It\'s sooooo annoying when they\'re short. But with this story, I don\'t need to fear about me being able to read any chapters in five minutes!!! ARIGATO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But as I was saying, I love your writing style. Unlie so many other stories, you use lots of description, something I love. and not only that, but you use some good vocabulary. You don\'t find this very often....that makes me very sad..... T.T Anyways! I love this story, and your writing is amazing! Keep it up and I\'ll keep reading, and reviewing(it\'s recently become a habit)!!!!!!!! KYAAAAAA!!! But the story is so SAD!!!!!!! Yet I love it all the same!!!!!! ^.^ ......Is it sad that it makes me think of the song Missing by Evanescence(EVI!!!!!!!!!! LOVE!!!!!!!) just because I was listening to that song on repeat when i first read your story? -_______-; You know, the lyrics for The Cape of Storms by Hyde(Larc-en-ciel) fits this story very well if you read the words behind the actual lyrics. ......I have NO life.... -_______-; UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And please do so soon or I\'ll sick rabid lemurs on you!!!! PLEASE UPDATE QUICKLY!!!!!!!!!!!! ::puppy eyes::

OMG! I absolutly LOVE this story! Why haven\'t I noticed it untill now? Ever since I started watching Witch Hunter Robin, my favorite character was Michael and thought it would be nice to see a little yaoi involving him! :D I love how the relationship is between Sakaki? (can\'t spell) and Michael, then the evil Zazein?! Poor Michael, and now Amons involved, when will this nightmare end! I can\'t wait for the next chapter, I am looking forward in seeing what happens next and if Sakaki is going to kick some horny old dude\'s ass! LOL! Great job once again!

I love it! Fantastic! Subarashii! (Subarashii= Wonderful) But if you don\'t update soon, I\'ll sick rabid chinchillas on you, and poke you with a hot fork!!!!!!! Don\'t think I won\'t!! So, to avoid any injuries, please just update. I don\'t want to resort to violence. Who\'d write the story if you were in the hospital with entire boy in a cast? ^.^ PLEASE UPDATE! (When was the last time you did?) I first read this a few months ago and I haven\'t seen one new chapter! XP It really is okii! (okii= great) ^.^

KYAAA!!!!!! I forgot to say poor Michael! MICHAEL!!!!! Kyaa! I feel so bad for him!!! Meaning you did a very good job writing it! ^.^ I\'ve finally found a Michael and Sakaki with an actual PLOT!!!!!!! I\'m tired of plotless stories... it gets annoying. And since no one seems to notice that they aren\'t skipping with joy I have to say this too. POOR SAKAKI!!!! POOR AMON!!!!! People who have reviewed your story don\'t seem to realise it\'s not a lonesome depression in it. But I really do love it! Keep writing it!!!!!! You\'re story is the best I\'ve found here..... and trust me..... I\'ve looked. You\'re an amazing writer! Keep it up!!!! ^.^

Oh, and by the way.... whoever left a review as ORLANDOSGIRL, YOU\'RE DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (sorry... -________- .....whoever left that is not in serious danger from me..... she just better not buy anything with him on it. He DESPISES that. I like to keep his wishes in mind.)