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for Power and Control

by VickieB

schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. Poor Michael and Amon... and Sakaki! Please continue! And if possible, make it a happy ending so I don't feel so sorry for these guys!
person nicki
schedule September 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story keep it up and keep me updated send me when the new chapture comes out
person Cas Rigby
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is totally hot. I have trouble seeing Amon so... submissive, but it's forgivable. If I knew you, I'd give you a nice long kiss.
person nutmeg
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg your so cruel to leave chapter 9 at a cliffy like that! *cries* Update soon or else!
person SatanicRebel666
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sugoi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
person iJ3i
schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's so unfair!! I had to wait so long!! This site never works!!

Now that that's out of my system, I have to say that I'm almost left speechless. And that's saying something because I talk waaaay too much. And I have the favorite chapter syndrome, where I read a chapter and go, this is my favorite, and then I read the next, and then I'm like, no, *this* is my favorite. W I'm I'm going to say that this is my fave chapter until you update. That way, it won't be a lie. ^^

Um...what first...well...I feel soo sorry for poor Mikey. I can only relate with the whole panic attack thing, ( ::has had one too many:: ) but that's not even half his struggles, and they're bad enough on their own. I don't think I've ever wanted to give a bishie a hug any more than I do now...even taking Amon into consideration. Though...I'd still like to glomp him... Anyway, I watched a movie about rape today, so I was feeling a little down about the whole subject matter, and then this just made me even more down, but that's not a bad thing. It means, of course, that your work is powerful...touching.

And...I *really* want Amon to beat Zaizen's ass. Like...*major:nod:nod:: That would be nice. A...little shot with the orbo. Nah. That would be a waste. A good, physical beat down is much more...vengeful. Don't forget to hit him once for me!!

How ever you decide to give Zaizen his comeuppance (which you will, *right?* ::puppy dog eyes:: ) I'm sure it's going to be awesome. And how will I verify whether I'm right or not? You guessed it...a quick update!! ::wink wink:: Latah!

(A saddened, but enthused) J3
person Bubbles
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I blame you! Yes it\'s allr far fault! I couldn\'t stand any kind of Male/Male stories (even though now I\'m a huge fan of Gravitation) They drove me nuts till I discovered this story, I couldn\'t help but read it; It called my name. Anywho it\'s very, very well written and I can\'t wait till there is more, I\actuactually been reading this a while, but finally got around to reviewing -.-\'
Anywho yea, keep it up.
Tata for now

Your friendly Bouncing Bubbles
person auronslover
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good chapter poor amon and michale bad bad zaizen please update soon i can\'t wait
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You updated! I\'m feeling so bad for Michael, though--I gotta say, I\'m not a fan of rape, and I\'m still holding out for Robin to show up and put Zaizen in an oven. Better yet, let\'s let Michael do it. You\'re doing really well with this, and I\'m hooked.
person Ru-chan
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TT_TT Poor Michael! +gives Michael a hug+ Kill Zaizen! +borrows Abyssinian\'s katana and slays Zaizen with it+ ...rawr.
I have to say, this is the best WHR fic I\'ve read so far... ^-^ Heeheehee. >.> <.< >.> I\'ve got something for rape fics... ^^;; Excellent fic, this is, indeed. KEEP WRITING!! RAWR!! XD

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