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for Power and Control

by VickieB

person Sapphire
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beautiful as always, even if I feel too tired to even write a review (or spell it for that mater)
I think Sakaki is too cute, he makes me want to squeeze him...
Too tired... ninigh...
person auronslover
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i don\'t think ive ever been so anxious for a update th for for the update!!! please update soon i love this story
person iJ3i
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, now I\'m ultra paranoid about that whole ratings thing. ::scratches head:: On to the point:
::jumps for joy:: How nice...they finally got some time together and did some good ol\' fashioned kinks! How Michael washed and rinsed Sakaki\'s hair safely is beyond me. *I* can\'t keep the soap from my eyes for the life of me. Michael\'s got mad skills! ANYhoo, I\'m through being silly. Great update and I can\'t wait for more! ::pictures an annoyed seagull:: Oh, gees... I wonder how long that\'ll stick with me....
Update soon!
J3
person Liz
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. You know a good way for them to beat Zaizan? Tell Robin what\'s going on. She\'ll burn him into a big pile of Zaizen-steak.
person Finchgirl
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, usually I don\'t like slash, and to be frank I skim the lemons, but beyond that I do like the story. You have a good plot, your writing flows well, and I would like to see how this whole thing turns out. Personally I would like to see Zaizen make a try for Robin, and get fried (or at least singed, if you don\'t want to kill him off just yet). What a bastard, he deserves it.
person Sapphire
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* this is sad... and angsty... although I should have expected that from a rape fic...

Its good, and you shoupdaupdate it soon.
I like how you left off this chapter, atleast sakaki(sp?) finnaly gets to wake up next to his lover.
person iJ3i
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry about the double review! I *HATE* it when that happens! ANYhoo, I just want you to know I\'m still a great big fan of this story, and icoulcould, I\'d give Amon the biggest hug right now. He\ne one of mye che characters and...it\'s just so sad what\'s going on with all the guys. ::shakes head:: I *cannot* wait for the climax and I hope you update soon! I\'m starting to bite my nails to the nubs with anticipation!

J3
person eve
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is an awsome story. Damn Zaizen, he\'s a fucking bastard. he deserves to die VERY slow, VERY painful death! Update soon.
person alyson b. costa
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more! i can\'t wait to find out more! that informant that amon has ........ maybe he\'s the one who used to comfort amon back before michael took his place? can\'t wait! i look forward to your next installment! does that make me really sadistic? keep going, and please update soon :D -- alyson -- http://www.visual-sentiments.net - tlcsucker@hotmail.com
person iJ3i
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, as always. It\'s important to let us feel the heartbreak and all the pain, so that when Zaizen finally gets his comeuppance, it\'ll bet mut much better. Waiting for updates is such agony! ::rubs hands together:: Damn. I wish Amon could haotteotten there sooner, but...as I said before, we need all the angst and torture we can stand. Gees, this story rocks. Please Update...update...update! Burn Zaizen! Just desserts!

J3

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