rate_review Reviews

Excellent chapter, as always. It\'s important to let us feel the heartbreak all tll the pain, so that when Zaizen finally gets his comeuppance, it\'ll be that much better. Waiting for updates is such agony! ::rubs hands together:: Damn. I wish Amon could have gotten there sooner, but...as I said before, we need all the angst and torture we can stand. Gees, this story rocks. Please Update...update...update! Burn Zaizen! Just desserts!

J3

:D
Double team the evil villian Zaizen! Macho Mil anl and Sidekick Sakaki to the rescue! I meant to mention this in a previous review, but I think I was too excited to remember at the time. ::looks away innocently:: I\'m so glad you introduced Amon into the mix. It just makes it so much more...entralling! Kick ass, Amon-san! This story is addictive, you know? Terribly, terribly addictive. Requests:
-Update!
-Have Michael and Sakakck ack ass! And sprinkle more bishounen angst in the midst of the battle! I just can\'t get enough!
-Update!
-Keep up the good work!
-Um...what else? Um...Oh yeah! Update!
:D
J3

ahhh why did u end it there? ah oh well i love thtorytory it\'s so good your my new fave author this story is great please please keep writting thankies

OMG! i love this! i\'ve been reading it since you posted it! please update soon. i can\'t wait! ^-^

No, no, no! With the two of them, it would take no special powers to kill the Bastard.
I hate molesters.

omg i love this story it\'s so great each chapter is more and more exciting please update soon please please ties
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I....absolutely....LOVE this story! It\'s unbearable...how great it is. It has all the makings of one of those ultra cool movies that get bad reviews because critics have no imagination and the general public\'s still sucking on the thumbs of war movies and movies about ancient ti But But this? This is gold. It\'s like...Pringles! Addictive. Addictive and good. But by no means cheap. This.......... This is really awesome. ::takes a deep breath and tries to calm down:: Damn. If this were a book, I\'d totally buy it, and I don\'t buy books, believe you me. Two thumbs up! And all the other fingers, too!

J3

BTW... Update!

ch.4 is great! zaizen really does have power and control! Can\'t wait for more... =)

#1 : I am currently hoarding a SWAT team in preparation of rushing Zaizen\'s office and snatching that tape for my own personal enjoyment!
#2 : No excuses. Though I like Doujima\'s character, we all know she\'s a stone cold bitch sometimes, and, to me, she was in character here.
#3 : I thoroughly appreciate the way you write. I have no idea what it is, but something about it helps me to stay on track and focused, and better imagine what\'s going on. Great job! Looking forward to that confrontation!

A highly enthused J3

Keep writing! Great story, very interesting plot! =)