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for The Battousai Becomes a Man

by Lexie

person Cinque
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
/Very/ sweet and just perfect. Thanks for a lovely read.
person Anon
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so sweet. I love T/K love stories, especially when kenshin is as adorably inexperienced as he is in this one. Please write similar ones and keep up the good work.

TaTa
person Ayuri
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely amazing! I love your elegant writing style and careful attention of detail... and especially your unique choice of subject matter; there is too little good fanfiction out there about Kenshin & Tomoe. Keep writing! :)
person Sobakasu
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fic about Tomoe and Kenahin! You should write more abaut ths couple, I think that trere are enough fics KxK bu no about Tomoe.

If somebody knows other fics of Kenshin and Tomoe, please send me it to my e-mail.

Bye!!
person Jessie
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps wildly* G sto story. It seemed like the characters were living more in the TV series universe rather than the OAV universe, but that works just fine. I thought you did a great job with Kenshin\'s first time. I\'ve read a lot of \"first time\" fics (admittedly only one other Kenshin first time) and this story is one of the only successful ones IMO. The others always have the guy being a stallion the first time, and yeah, it would be great if that were the cabut but it generally isn\'t, so GOOD JOB! I thought Tomoe was a little out of character, but that\'s ok. As I already said, the universes seemed to have been crossed a bit, so I think it fit in that case. (BTW, when I say the universes are crossed, I realise the OAV is a prequil, but there are two very different approaches to style, acting and story-telling between the two--although this is an OAV fic it has the feel of a series fic) In anye, ae, again, great job!
person kaishi
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the best KenshinxTomoe lemon I have ever read. You portray Kenshin\'s youth and Tomoe\'s thoughts, aggressions so well! Everything about this fic is absolutely perfect! ^^
person Mai Mai
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww..the story\'s really great...but the ending was uh, sweet in a way..it kinda saddens me to know though that there is no tomorrow for them..awww...=( but your story\'s nice. great lemon as always =)
person Wistful-Eyes
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You continued; but I guess this is the last and final chapter......since.....the you-know-what-tragedy is coming up. ;_; But you know, you could always make it an AU universe so that she survives or that they had more time together... :P Well, cyz!
person Zelix
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading this... danm that REALLY good... i\'ve read a LOT of lemons but this is without a doubt an S-class lemon... the raknings go that D is pathetic, C, is a bit better, B is age, ge, A is very good and S is well... superb...
person WistfulEyes
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was good!!! It was interesting to see Tomoe as the \"agressor\" rather than Ken.... ^^;;; I hope you write more KenshinXTomoe fics soon! There are so few of them out there, especially lemons....

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