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Hi! I really like your story.This is only the second Weiss story I\'ve read and don\'t read the series so I don\'t really know much about anyone. The other one is called Innocent Teen By Yamikitsune if ya want to read it some time. Please update soon. I like the fact that you made the plant start to die when Omi left. Keep up the good work. Ja ne!

Yet another good chapter ^-^ I like it so far. hope to see more soon.

Thankyou for everyone reveiwing my story. I will continue posting the chapters when I get a total of five reveiws on each chapter from the different websites it\'s posted on.

^-^ I like it so far. I have been so deprived of Omi torture I will read just about any thing. Although, I find it a bit hard to stay focused on this story. (it\'s not the spelling, or grammar or any thing like that ^-^ it really is a wonderful story) Just, the charaters seem...I dunno a bit out of charater for me. I think you might wanna try adding a bit more detail to each scean. It took me a while to get down the fact that I can\'t have five sentances in one scean.

This isn\'t meant to be a flame. So please dont\' take it as one ^-^ I will continue reading, and reviewing your fic. ^-^ and if you like I will continue leaving hints and tips of how you might be able to make the story even better. Update soon! Ja ne!~