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for First-Aid Lesson

by ChibiChula

person Yami Jay
schedule February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually want to read more of this story. And yes, it seems that Youji has the bad role in this... But what about ken? Will he help Omi and Aya, or will he side with Youji? I personnaly hope he helps Omi and Aya.
person Yutaka-chan
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoah.. Omi sounds so... un-Omi... I think... but continue anyway! I\'m, really looking forward to the end of the story! ^.^
person lo
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was really well written. I liked how you portraed Omi. nice job
person Loki
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh goddess, that\'s a horrible choice....but I\'ll go for the all at once. As much as I\'d like the story to continue as soon as possible, it would be more enjoyable to be able to read and enjoy straight through.
Hope this helps!

~Loki
person Zakaru
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best fics I've ever read. ^^ Please update soon! x_x
person Sio-chan
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HELLO! UPDATE PLEASE! It\'s not fair you give us this wonderfu st(whe(when Aya/Omi pairings are so hard to find), and then leave it unfinished for 4 months. GET THE LEAD OUT AND UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF MIKE!
person Nozomi
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. That was good. I like the little bit about Yohji having seen...... mwahahahahaha....
Please write more soon!
person Kai is mine
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks was really good, i want to read more please up date =)
person May
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!! Absolutly lovely!! I\'m so curious how it will continue!! thanx for the great fiction!!!
person ryushin
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I seriously hope that there is more of the goodness where
these two chappies came from.
Good work although I\'m not an Aya/Omi ..or is it the other way around..fan,
I liked it very much so far.

Please update soon

bye
ryushin

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