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for Sibling Rivalry

by SpiralBreeze

person chell
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. a bit thrown together. but it was sweet. you really don\'t like max, do you?
person dread
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yuo have the sickest mind!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person weird
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can barely type.

my mind will be haunted forever.

please dont write a sequel!!
person Typewriter
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god. That was a long enthralling story. I take it you don\'t like Max. Anyways great job and never, nerver, NEVER write a sequel to this fic or you\'ll be hearing from lawyers, ninjas, and of course law ninjas.
person X
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, I got a few things to tell you. First, great fic for being creative.

I take it you dont like Max.

And you certainly dont know the court system.
person Disturbed
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, um..... could u maybe make another like this only less um..... rapeish ? k thx. damn you ! now im scared to go near my little brother !
person sirhcnotilih
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that fuckfucked up.and like it!
5 out of 5!
gotta write a sequel!
person Raven
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! Great story!!! Simply brilliant! That black judge was freaking halarious!!! I was laughing the whole chapter! I was feeling really sorry for ash and misty though. Im glad they had a happy ending. I will never be able to look at Max on that damn pokemon show the same way again, lol...

Great story!
person SuitCase
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awfully entertaining. Thank you for an enjoyable half hour, I didn't expect to but I got sucked in :P
person Nightmare
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool nice to see you finished it

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