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Sibling rivalry was sick twisted, and entertaining! I never liked Max and I'm glad he's dead! Mwuahahah! Misty and Ash forever! hehe

Excellent truly excellent, the story was well thought out and well written. the plot twists really seemed to fit in really well and ever since i read the first chapter i knew that this story had something in it that made it good and although i never could identify what it was. i hope you don't stop writing for a very long time because you seem to have a knack it it even if it's something strange that most don't like to think about. well thats it for me and i'll look for another one of your stories (if you make anymore) from time to time.

"Never hang up your pen just because one bad story or no reviews. Someone may read your story and like it but not review it, never let it get you down." (this one doesn't apply to sibling rivalry though."

-Botched

THANK GOD!!!! If that didn't end I would have LOST it! (Look at my review aboo kno know most of my thoughts on this!) It's about time that Max fucking killed himself!
PLEASE WRITE MORE! IT'S TOO GOOD TO STOP!

Hmmm. That's was a ummm calm ending but i still love the judge she should have her own series. She's 2 damn funny. I can imagine Sam doing that LOL. errr great job muhaha. Why do your stories always do better than mine ; ;.

Best ending to a sadisctic fanfic EVER!!

Okay...there's a few things i have to get off my chest (And please read all of this). actually...alot of things. Your characters are insane, everyone is ooc, May's stupid, Max is stupider, you completely made mockery of the black judge and the irish priest, a father can't kidnap his own daughter, Jenny isn't that much of a bitch (and if she was, i'd have to put her in her place myself) The court was completely stupid, not enough evidence nor serious witnesses, no judge would have ignored the reports, no cop would drug a criminal in front of witnesses, no body curses that much in public, and it seems as if this entire world is just a stupid black hole of insanity........ And for all of these things i have listed..... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!! Seriously i'm gonna keep reading this shit! Well played fellow writer! (P.S wow....giovanni.... Didn't see that coming.)

XD Im sorry but this was one hell of a good fic. Yes, it was VERY Screwed up... Hell, it was worse then that! But it was great none the less. My favorite part had to be the comentary, it made you "laugh" even though the stroy made you "cry" See were im goin with this? Bloody ell i ope you are! w00t! There is no way in hell this is the last chapter, i will not have it. I command you to write her!her! >=3 just because im evil that way. *nod nod*


And trust me, your WAY beyond help... I should know.... *mummbles about my fic that was also screwed up with incest* Yea.... ummm I know where your commen from so hehehehehehe........

I must be more screwed up than I thought, because I actually liked this. I could've done without all the references to God, but oh well.

OOOOKKAAYYY.......(To quote the movie The Abyss) "Hands down: the goddamnedest thing I ever saw!"

man making max kill himself..........cool keep up the good work