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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really creepy story. You know that don't you? Max scares me. You even made me use short sentances. I never do that. I normally rant in long sentances, using too many commas and adding unrelated things to them, like how Ash should have proven he was a virgin medically before they sentanced him, it's really easy to do, all you have to do is urinate ten feet or something, but I have to becabecabecause he aistyisty just ruined that plea.
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love this story! You are awesome, I absolutely loved how you showed how fucked up Max is, I've always known he had a screw loose, little bastard. The Ash/Misty scene was absolutely beautiful, and when I say beautiful I mean it was so moving and touching it was great. I can't wait for the next chappie, keep up the great work
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August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(In shock after reading this)
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(Snaps out of shock)
...Something's wrong with you...really!
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(Snaps out of shock)
...Something's wrong with you...really!
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang...that chapter was a freaking work of art...I really liked that part with ASh and Misty together. What he said was almost like poetry. Great job!
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O; i can see this wont end well..... oh well keep the story going!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A little off the deep end, but craziness and chaos are what I like. Great story, keep updating!
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
judge ruled :)
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this story is amazing. That's the only thing that describes it accurately. Keep up the incredible work and get the next chapter out soon.
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heh...you say that something is wrong with you...well guess what. There is nothing wrong. The imagination of a human being can dive deeper into the depths of self torture and mutilation. If anything you could have gone even further with the mutilation that Max rightly deserved. But you didn't therefore you are not mad. Compared to some of society's people who I'm sure venture even further into the acts of sexuality and mutilation you were pretty light. May this give you some solice and merit towards your own worth and may you update soon.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude this is just one !@#$%^ Fanfiction u have to be a sick person in the head to write this i jsut read one chapter and i know this is disgusting