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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a fucking gen Gen Genius i say. You are a pimp and if your a girl you a she-pimp. Jesus christ women. I especially like the giovanni-ash family connection though i would have preferred a full trial with Gio showing his lawyer prowess. Also nice sex scenes not as detailed or long as i like but still very nice
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would love a sequal and hopefully i can think up some ideas for you. but another great chapter but you kept your loyal readers in suspense for too long. good luck
and i\'ll be watching for the next chapter. -Botched
and i\'ll be watching for the next chapter. -Botched
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, cute story ^^
(Am I too late?)
I really like it, maybe cause I can\'t stand Max ^^\'
Just keep on writing, will ya? Pleazzzzzzzzze.
(Am I too late?)
I really like it, maybe cause I can\'t stand Max ^^\'
Just keep on writing, will ya? Pleazzzzzzzzze.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I was hoping for a scene of Pikachu shocking the shit outta some idiot, either the Brit, Max, or that damn judge...
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please update...it has been longer than two weeks lol. Your an awesome writer
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the best, and weirdest, Pokéfic i have ever read. keep it going, i wanna find out what happens next!
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey ive just finished reading the newest chapter in your story
and talk about suprises for every1 giovanni is ashs old man huh never wouldve thoughta that
anyway keep up the good work im hoping ash gets out of prison before anything happens to him
lol anyway keep me posted as to when the next chapter is out
thanx
and talk about suprises for every1 giovanni is ashs old man huh never wouldve thoughta that
anyway keep up the good work im hoping ash gets out of prison before anything happens to him
lol anyway keep me posted as to when the next chapter is out
thanx
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you continue to keep me interested in your story. Please keep up the good work.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this fic. I think it\'s great so far. I just hope that little bastard Max gets what he deserves in the end.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. You must definately continue this story.