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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was deliciously evil. **insert evil laugh**. I want some sympathy for Ashy and WTH is wrong with that damn family. Everyone has issues. May= weak as fuck. Max= Has mental problems and needs his dick choped off. Norman just needs to be shot. The mother just needs to run off into the starlight with her lovers.
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Shit. was not expecting that. Bravo. Bravo. and you are right there is a uncanny resemblance between ash and Giovanni Rocketto.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite excellent. sorry i didn\'t review earlier but i just discovered the site and it took me a while to work my way through all the cartoons and anime that i enjoy to pokemon. it is a very excellent story and i hope that you finish it.
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome update soon!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey just finished the latest chapter of your story
its starting to get intense now lol
i feel sorry for ash (cute as he is) heh
anyway i hope he gets off (the charges that is)
heh
anyway god luck with nex next chapter
and let me know when u post it pls
its starting to get intense now lol
i feel sorry for ash (cute as he is) heh
anyway i hope he gets off (the charges that is)
heh
anyway god luck with nex next chapter
and let me know when u post it pls
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June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I clicked on the link to this story I was like \"Great, this is gonna be dumb...\" But, after reading it I really liked it ^-^ Unlike your other readers, I don\'t have a huatreatred for May (but I will agree that Misty is way better). Anyway, keep it up, it\'s a really awesome story!
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This a great story. THE BEST. I hope the next chappter will be out soon! I don\'t know if you care or if it\'s already too late. What i think that should happen is that Ash\' dad would appear. And it would be even better if Ash\'s dad was some important guy in govermemt or in army or some scientist or something but that\'s just what i think. But no matter what you write it\'s gone be good. Thank you!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!
Update soon!
Update soon!
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude Wth!!!
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh...you arte a twisted sick gross individual.....maybe thats why i like you so much.^^Well ill be waitin fer the next chapter.bye!