rate_review Reviews

That was.... Intense. I was pulled in all different kinds of directions, where I could sympathize with all the characters. Great work.

wow, that was so i cant even find the words so shu knew what eiri wanted!! man your a good writer

Wow... just wow...

I actually cried for this one... The suspense was killing me as I sat there thinking, cry Yuki, cry damit!... but he doesn\'t do it until Shuichi\'s left... I cried like a little baby, it was awesome.

wow, just. . .omg, amazing. This story actually, i dunno, you're wording and thought sequence was just amazing, I actually cried with Yuki. I'm totally blown away by this, really, i mean, you have an amazing talent, you were able to realitically portray the emotions that would be felt in such an event. And i love the ending, l mean I personally hate fics about yuki and shu breaking up, and i wouldn't have kept reading your's if not for the writing, but in the end, it wasn't a break up story at all, it was just a fantastic way of wrag itg it up. I loved it, I feel like i've just read a novel and it was only three chapters,, and i just want to thank you, 'cuz frankly fanfiction isn't generally all that well written and this story just litterally blew me away, i don't think i'll ever be satisfied w/ mediocre writting again. ^__^

wow. you really captured the raw and open and wouding feelings of this nature bring apon people. your writing style was a bit choppy but the words and the emotion was incredible. when i was finished reading i had to sit for a few seconds so all o own own emotions and thoughts could catch up with me. excellent. pure. open. raw. broken. stripped. real.

I would just like to shake your hand for writing this fic. For ever 100 horrid ones there is one that shines above the rest. I was extremely impressed by this story. ^_^ I particularly enjoy your attention to each character\'s nuances. I loved how you kept Yuki cynical. I also enjoyed how you kept him apart from the activities on the couch. Most writers would have used this plot device as an excuse to write a threesome and then add some sort of happy \"they all lived together\" ending. This, of course would have done a horrible injustice to the characters. I also enjoyed how you decribed seeing someone of the same sex naked for the first time. You hit the nail on the head, tust me.(got me thinkin to how it was for me.) I give you five stars and a cookie! ^_^ I hope to read more from you in the future.

I don\'t care if it was a cliché ending I cried damn it I loved it!!!!

OK, I am sure I have reviewed this twice, however, I have read it more than that *grins*. I really wish you\'d write another Yuki POV, you capture it possibly better than any other fic I\'ve read. Yuki and Shu anyway, that is the only pair I care about. Or you could keep Hiro in in someway, as long as it\'s.. oh whatever. Write more is my point! And post it! Do it NOW! Thank you!

Fantastic, Hiro/Shu-chan is always good but the who fic was wonderful! Im totally en aen away and even found myself crying a little lol!

Fucking Fantastic keep up the good work and write more ^_^

Aurorax

PatoSan, you didn\'t disapoint me. I loved your fic. Great job, person!!!!!