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for In Over Your Head

by PatoSan

person Kay
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was like the weirdest gravi that I have ever read. It was weird to have shu and hiro together. I guess ntednted to read something new.....but.....damn....you got me crying and feeling real bad now...I thought that Shuichi left him forever. I wanted to yell and say that eiri is an idiot for doing that. You should write more of those....you will be very good at that. I really loved it. I wao cro cry I loved the ending soooo sweet... Keep writeing more. I will read them
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... great ending. Got a little scared there for a second. I love how Yuki thinks throughout the whole thing, and his descriptions. You did very well with this story. Congratulations. It was excellent ^_^
person Nikki
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fous.ous. I love this story, and didn\'t mind the ending at all. I actually found it surprising, I expected it to be Tatsuya, having received a call from Shu to check on his brother, and Yuki being finally crushed one last time after thinking it was Shuichi holding him. Why did I expect such an unhappy ending? From the rest of the story I guess, I loved it all!
person Skwishee
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Love Love Love LOVE it. VEEEEERY well written and insightful as well. THough as much as I adore Yuki/ Shuichi I was almost thrilled that he WAS going to have Hiro instead. I love Hiro/Shuichi. But it ended well as it was, so I have no roomcompcomplain. THanks or a fantastic read!
person Khellamendra
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit.

That\'s all that can be said because I can\'t describe how great this story was.

Yuki\'s POV was beautiful and from the reviews no one new what was coming.

God it was great go Yuki and you must post more beautiful storlikelike this.
person katie
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I almot feel sorry for the guy.....ALMOST!
person baka~saru
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yuki is such an ass!
person hyperactivator
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More!
:(
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
T_T! Yuki you jerk! Sexy as hell anyways. Great job! Can\'t wait for the next chapter! ^_^
person weisskatzchen
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^

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