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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHH very very good. I love the way you describe things. It makes it so much more interesting!!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
for the love of god, you must give us the res thi this! are you insane?? this is too cool. i am fascinated by yuki\'s descriptions of how surreal the whole concept of sex can be.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another well written chapter! There\'s really nothing more to say than wow...
Is this your only fanfiction, or do you have more? If this is your first, don\'t make it your last, you write wonderfully!
Is this your only fanfiction, or do you have more? If this is your first, don\'t make it your last, you write wonderfully!
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous so far! I can\'t wait for more! How fun for us readers, this is a great thought out story. So dark and wicked in a good way!
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an extremely, fantastically, and outstandingly wonderful beginning of a Yuki-centric tale. No joke. It was absolutely superb and fabulous. There is explicit amounts of detail which just makes the story even more interesting than it already has portrayed. The plot was indeed rather predictable, but there is still much thrilling suspense/mystery in what will happen next. Patiently, and yet also eagerly I will wait for your update. Again, I congradulate you for your splendid work. Good luck in your future writing pieces.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful, I think you have Yuki\'s thought patterns perfect. The build up is slow and delicious, leaving me hoping you\'ll update soon. I love the deep, complex philosophy in this piece, and find it wonderfuly erotic at the same time. I would have thought that was an impossible meld, but you\'ve done it with style and professionalism. I look forward to more.
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job! I love how... deliciously evil it is! Can\'t wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey... good job, person... it\'s soooo wicked.
I hope you post new capters soon... I\'d love to read more
I hope you post new capters soon... I\'d love to read more
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN! This is so yummy and exactly what I WISH would happen. ^_^ I can\'t wait to read the next two chapters/parts.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I love how you\'re writing this. It\'s very interesting. I think it\'s because of how you\'re wording things. And you have Yuki down very well. I can\'t wait to read more!