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*tear* that was so sad... and lovely!!!:)

Please make a sequal to this story. I want to know what happens afterwards.

wow you should make a sequel where Okita has to help Tetsu get 'better'

wow that was intersting.thu i have to say i don't like rape to much(its to sad)i love the susum/tatsu paring and wish there were more storys to this paring,But over all great work^_____^

It's one good fanfic story. Chibi_Tetsu-kun being raped by Susumu and helped by Okita. Not that I hate Susumu or his pairing with CHibi_Tetsu-kun but I love Chibi_Tetsu-kun and Kawai_Okita-chan pairing. Well, anyway, in the waiting time that look like forever, until now, THERE IS NO FANFICS SPECIAL ABOUT TETSUxOKITA PAIRING ToT'.

quite a well made fic....but the pairing doesn\'t appeal to me...its kinda overly used and common pairing...i want the unlikely yet fluffy/exciting pairing...i mean both susu and tetsu are kids....same temperamental so it doesn\'t have the spine tingling effect....but i\'ve read a fic with a highly unlikely but addictive pairing
(to my honest opinion) it a tetsuxokita pairng...i know this pairing is soooo rare...its unused.....overly intriguing..i mean they\'re polar opposites...ones calm and ones fiery.......(tingles!) ehehehe.........i know its asking the impossible but why not try it!!!!!!!i\'ve urge other authors to try out different and new pairing for different series......for variety..to keep readers spark of interest..........and the results are cool...lots of hits.........that\'s why i loyally read their works because they have a unique...and risk taking way of writing..ehehehe...i mean i wouldn\'t have thought of a young rosettexchrono pairing in chrono crusade fics......my jaw drop when i saw it......it was so tingly i wanted to see what was it ll about....talk about crazy...........different!so why not tyr it out? if u would like to give me ur honest (positive or negative) opinion pls email me at konoha_ninja3888@yahoo.com.au.....i will gladly take it as an outspoken and pruod (yipes!) fanfic reader.....thnx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keeep up da gud work XD

This is so freaky creepy, it\'s good.

I never really would have thought Susumu would do something like that to poor Tetsu, but hey, its your story. I liked it, and the song made it even better. I\'ll give you a 3 out of 5 for a good plot, and good vocabulary. Though, I did get a little confused on what some of the words were since I couldn;t understand them when spelled wrong, but thats really nothing to worry about. 3 out of 5 might sound bad, but in terms with me, its not, its like average. So yeah, I liked it, and thats all I have to say I guess. ^_^

Susumu would never....well maybe....he does have a mean side to him^_^ Crazy 0_o!

Well it WAS good up until the very end. I honestly don\'t get this Okita x Tetsu pairing that so many of you have come up with. I guess you guys are watching or reading a different anime/manga then I am ... cause they are most definitely NOT a couple -_-

It woulda been cute for Tatsu to find Tetsu and let them have a brotherly moment there. But of course you just can\'t have brotherly love .. you probably woulda turned it into something like incest T__T