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Hey, great story. Just thought I would add that Rei wouldn't eat gelatin as you put in your story. Gelatin is made from animal bones...and she's vegitarian. That's a small point though, the story is excellent. :)

I love your story and I think your one of the best authors on AFF.net and I cann`t wat to read the next chapter so please update soon

i really loved this chapter and i can't wait for the next. i'm going to your site right now.

TheEndOfAllThingsGoodAndBad: Once this one is done, there is always my next story to look forward to. muahahahahah!!!!!!!!! But thank you, you flatter me. :-)

Why am I always wrong, whether I go with my instincts or not? I should have waited till I was done reading!!!

One question, since Rei is already so pale, will Shinji need to squint and shade his eyes with his arms when she starts glowing the next day?

XD HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

I haven't finished reading this new chapter yet, but it's ok because I already know what Im gonna say.

Today is the new 'best day of my life' because I've read another chapter of this story. :) That says it all I hope.

But on the other hand, I started thinking... You must have no consideration for other authors who like to write for these pairings, I mean, you've raised the bar beyond the MOON now!! Like that song from the anime credits, *sings* 'Fly me to the mo-'*cough* ahem.. Sorry... Wait, why am I apologizing? What am I gonna do once this whole story is finished? I'll never find another Shinji/Rei fic to compare to this one, you've erased the possibility of that!

... Still love ya tho... xP

Ciao! Gotta finish reading.

Awesome new chapter, I just loved it your story just seems to get better and better. I look forward to reading more.

Heh, this story seems to only get better and better, which is saying something. I can't wait till the next chapter is up. Can't wait till the update

Yes the rest of the chapters will be added. It just takes time to add each chapter because I'm proofreading them again, correcting errors in some language use (such as mistakenly using -dono with Dr. Akagi's name. A site I looked at a while back said that it was used with doctors and lawyers and other "high educated" people. I have since discovered that -dono is an archaic honorific used for lords and ladies... so instead of calling her Dr. Akagi they were calling her Lady Akagi... the correct honorific for doctors and lawyers is -sensei...) Also, adding pictures to illustrate a scene, making sure all the links are right and the formatting is right... plus I'm working some long hours so it's not like I have a lot of time. I skipped ahead to the latest chapters because they require far less proofreading and expanding, but they'll eventually all be up. Thanks for the interest. :-)

Two things. One, great chapters alround, not a single bad one yet. I LOVE THIS STORY! anyway, on to reason two. On your site, are chapters 6-19 going to be added or am i just unable to use their links for some wierd reason?