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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES ANOTHER CHAPTER YES FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MORE!!!! I NEED MORE!!!! ^_^
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly a masterpiece and i'am looking forward to the next chapter so plz update for the love of god or i will simply die.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, awesome new chapters. I love Rei and she is so true to character, but I hope she and Shinji relize how close they both are and how much closer they want to be. I look forward to the next chapter.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Holy jebus this is good. For the most part, each character is IN character. It\'s well written and suspensful. All the good stuff that most of the stories on this site need. And thanks for the nicely placed shoujo-ai ^_^
bring on chapter 18 and on!
bring on chapter 18 and on!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dying, DYING for an update. Please... You have the makings of the greatest evangelion fanfic ever written here, in my opinion. *Dodges the flying tomatoes of the people of different opinions* Please update, this is killing me.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m enjoying it, but the out of character-ness is a little unwarranted. So far, nothin really justifies why Shinji is acting *so* severe. It\'s not so unbelievable, but it does remove a bit of the reality. The Japanese / English fusion puts me off a little. I know that when I was in my ultra-Japan phase, I wanted to prove to everyone that I knew a couple phrases (if not many), but it kinda distracts from the flow. It does look really promising, though, and, let\'s face it, of course Shiniji would think that. :D
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why? 17 chapters and you stick us with a sort of cliffhanger type thing? FINISH THIS UP, FOR GOD\'S SAKE!!
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction this story is going in alot it seems like this could be a real good one... too bad its not finished..are you gonna continue it? If you do ill be sure to read the next chapter :) i like the reality you put into this story it seems so...Real!
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Above average, though there are a distracting number of typos and misspellings scattered around.
Is Chapter 17 all there is, or will you add to this? It looked sort of like you were building up to a climax (no pun intended) but the last chapter isn\'t it.
Is Chapter 17 all there is, or will you add to this? It looked sort of like you were building up to a climax (no pun intended) but the last chapter isn\'t it.
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy shit woman! a lemon with a very detailed plot! it\'s about time!
continue wriitn gthis story, or I will hurt you! I love it that much!
i particularly loved the therapy sessions with asuke, and the entirety of the maya plot. TYTYTYTYTYTYTY
continue wriitn gthis story, or I will hurt you! I love it that much!
i particularly loved the therapy sessions with asuke, and the entirety of the maya plot. TYTYTYTYTYTYTY