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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great details and format. Goes at the pace of a novel, make it into a book and I would read it =P. The was one of my most favorite parts, nice way of including that in in contrast to must not run away. I can imaging the characters doing most things insmalsmall little world, rarly OOC in my opinion. Nice job, can\'t wait for continuation.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like the Less than and Greater than marks didn\'t work? This in html? O well lol, it was \"I must run away\" in the thought boxes which were my favorite.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi !
All I can say is that I\'m more than impressed... even more than the way you describe the characters, the way you write about their thoughts, feelings, motives and actions is what makes them seem so real.
I really like the way you\'re slowly developing the romance between Shinji and Rei... in my opinino those two make an interesting couple. Sadly, there are way too little fics written with/about them as a couple... all the more reason for you to continue writing this story, I hope. Please, write on, I wanna know how this great fic will play out further ! Keep going, you\'re doing a great job here ! :)
Cya,
-- Sonicron
All I can say is that I\'m more than impressed... even more than the way you describe the characters, the way you write about their thoughts, feelings, motives and actions is what makes them seem so real.
I really like the way you\'re slowly developing the romance between Shinji and Rei... in my opinino those two make an interesting couple. Sadly, there are way too little fics written with/about them as a couple... all the more reason for you to continue writing this story, I hope. Please, write on, I wanna know how this great fic will play out further ! Keep going, you\'re doing a great job here ! :)
Cya,
-- Sonicron
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooo!! *bangs on monitor* Need new chappie nowwww!!! Too good to stop, hurry hurry! Will bribe!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LUV IT SO MUCH...i made a story just like tat!! except it different....with another guy...my OC......it nice..I LOVEUR STORY SO MUCH!!! Plz continue it! i need to read it!!!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love the pairings this is great!