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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0.0 ......... that was very shocking. I had no idea that this was going to happen .... Onegai at least do me one favor... please don\'t make a Kenshin and Megumi pairing they are just way to.... to... to diffrent form each other. ^^X
It was a good chapter, I hope you continue ....
~~~Your stories are changing the way people think, and that can be a gooooooood thing~~~
*^*u-chu-chan*^*
It was a good chapter, I hope you continue ....
~~~Your stories are changing the way people think, and that can be a gooooooood thing~~~
*^*u-chu-chan*^*
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a Sano/Kaoru fic!!
I like how you developed Sano and Kaoru\'s friendship into a sexual relationship, but I think it was a bit fast, like they only had lust/strong sexual feelings with the affection of friends for each other, not love. ^_^;; Kaoru is 17 and Sano is 19 in the manga, so they\'re at the peak of their sexual desires, you know?
Anyway I want to see how you\'re sort this out, hehe. Although I don\'t like those endings where Kenshin and Megumi suddenly discover their wild love and lust for each other and decide to get married right after Sano and Kaoru...*too* convenient and neat, ne?
I like how you developed Sano and Kaoru\'s friendship into a sexual relationship, but I think it was a bit fast, like they only had lust/strong sexual feelings with the affection of friends for each other, not love. ^_^;; Kaoru is 17 and Sano is 19 in the manga, so they\'re at the peak of their sexual desires, you know?
Anyway I want to see how you\'re sort this out, hehe. Although I don\'t like those endings where Kenshin and Megumi suddenly discover their wild love and lust for each other and decide to get married right after Sano and Kaoru...*too* convenient and neat, ne?
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when i read the last part of chapter 4 i was shocked! this is really good! i seriously can\'t wait for the next chapter! please have the next part out soon! please!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Sano and Kaoru only have a sexual atracction.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Praise Lexie, A lemon Between Saon & Kaoru is awesome. Please update soon, I want them to have a lot od study sessions.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you, thank you, and did I mention thank you. I like this alt. pairing a lot but I wonder what will happen now that Kenshin knows. More Please.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a god or goddess in my book, I hope you write more of awe awesome story and more lemons.
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh wow.. this isn\'t exactly sex without love... but nor is it exactly present... I LOVE IT! There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too drastic. the writing style is solid, but sometimes Sano in tears is a little hard to envision. oh well... still a great story
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April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... you ended the chapter at a good part *cries* what will happen next .... will Kenshin final bet the Hell out of Sano for touching his woman or will Megumi find out........ u must get a nother chapter out sooooooooooooooooooon * falls out of chair* I msut know what happen.... Onegai Onegai Onegai ....... don\'t leave me waiting toooo long ok ^^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;..... GREAT CHAPTER
***Kaoru-chan***
***Kaoru-chan***
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am a big Sano x Karou fan there is just not enough of this I would love to see fall for the Rooster andons ons would be great there is not one on Aff.net between these too. Please I would love to see Lemons