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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Y\'know, I was all blase about KK lemons after reading 100s of them over the years, but WOW! This one blew me away (lol). I hope you\'ll give we poor deprived readers some more crumbs to drool on! Luv it.
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Y\'know, I was all blase about KK lemons after reading 100s of them over the years, but WOW! This one blew me away (lol). I hope you\'ll give we poor deprived readers some more crumbs to drool on! Luv it.
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
orororororororororororororororororororo! @_@
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That was so goooood! I love ur fic ur doing great! Plz continue!
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That was so goooood! I love ur fic ur doing great! Plz continue!
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
how could u leave it there? ur the best lemon writer EVER, please please please update soon it\'s soooooooo good! ^_^
how could u leave it there? ur the best lemon writer EVER, please please please update soon it\'s soooooooo good! ^_^
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was one GOOD lemon! *fans self*
I\'m so glad it\'s got more chapters, I\'ll be looking out for this. ;) Now where did I put the ice...
I\'m so glad it\'s got more chapters, I\'ll be looking out for this. ;) Now where did I put the ice...
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Things are better pace than the first publishing, my young friend. Bravo! My keyboard in sticky with drool... and my sreen foggy with steam. Lovers are meant for Vengeance... and you have portrayed it well. I am so glad you are continuing to republish. It just get\'s better and better.
Tsuki-san
Tsuki-san
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is onethe the greatest ones I\'ve ever read. The best! I hope you\'ll be adding more chapters ^_^. I\'m sorry your story got deleted from ff.net. They\'re evil and wouldn\'t know a good story if it hit them. Oops, I\'m rambling. Sorry! Anyway, great story! Love it! Keep it up! ^^.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
x.o You would NOT believe the trouble I had finding the review thing. Gah. Anyway!
^^ I liked this very much! It was VERY spicy. It makes mine seem very tame. @.@ I liked the first chapter the best, but afterwards, I tht yht your grammar and paragraph form could\'ve been a little bit clearer. But don\'t mind me, I\'m sorta picky (and a hypite ite too: I have millions of dangling participles. Take that how you like.) when it comes to little English details. But overall, this was GOOD. It had a lot of the heat that some lemons these days are missing! And of course, you just made Kenshin and Kaoru into the hot couple that they really are--you had enough raw PASSION and WAFF and they balanced out wonderfully. Good job!
^^ I liked this very much! It was VERY spicy. It makes mine seem very tame. @.@ I liked the first chapter the best, but afterwards, I tht yht your grammar and paragraph form could\'ve been a little bit clearer. But don\'t mind me, I\'m sorta picky (and a hypite ite too: I have millions of dangling participles. Take that how you like.) when it comes to little English details. But overall, this was GOOD. It had a lot of the heat that some lemons these days are missing! And of course, you just made Kenshin and Kaoru into the hot couple that they really are--you had enough raw PASSION and WAFF and they balanced out wonderfully. Good job!
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April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it seemed like a funnier version of the chapter ... I loved it ^^ LOL
*Kaoru-chan*
*never give up*
*Kaoru-chan*
*never give up*
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this it very good this sure got me goin nice job
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Naughty, naughty.... what a Lemon. Torture? That is definitely a good word to use when describing this chapter. Sweet... I would think delectable, or delicious... or scrumptous... or... or... oh just something that is really really yummy. I cannot hardly imagine going throught something like that (actually I can... *winks*), but what a way to spend an afternoon.
Your English grammar and word usage has greatly improved. There are still a few words that are wrong, but not enough to take away from the story or its over all meaning or content. This is just such a naughty, well written peice of work... It is well beta read (you can tell because it flows so smooth) both you and Prudence-chan deserve a big Bravo, and a Well Done.
Well Done.
Tsuki-san
Your English grammar and word usage has greatly improved. There are still a few words that are wrong, but not enough to take away from the story or its over all meaning or content. This is just such a naughty, well written peice of work... It is well beta read (you can tell because it flows so smooth) both you and Prudence-chan deserve a big Bravo, and a Well Done.
Well Done.
Tsuki-san