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by ShaeyaSedjet

person kamille
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey there, i was kinda sad how there isnt an Angel or a Collins persona in this!
person offdutyninja
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you going to continue this story? i love it and your other one, which i see is no longer on AFF, but i dont want to keep my hopes up if you are dropping this story. it is sooooo good and i would love to read the rest
person Malik's Girl
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, I love this fic... please continue it!!! Please, please, pleeeeeease ***makes puppy eyes*** are new chappies coming soon?! K, I'm being a real pain... but don't stop it, OK?! This fic's hot! ^_^
person offdutyninja
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm hooked! it is so real, its wonderful! please please please continue! if not here then on on mediamine.org. it cant get enough of your work! please continiue this story and your other one! i love it!!!!!
person De Lazy Lady Lime
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BAHH!!! NO FAIR!! I want more!
I think the tension is great for their relationship...adversity builds character don't cha know.... I know Kaoru promised not to seduce him but could he decide to seduce her. Plus if ya think this is moving to fast just think about it, Sex on the first date is relatively common now. And since the first date is over plus Kenshin being celebate against his will I duun really see why it would be a problem...well that is if you want to take the story that way yet. I think this chapter was fine, More than anything though I'm glad to see the bunny came out of hidding for once. I've never seen "Rent" But now I'm very interested in seeing it sooo, If I can find a place other than NewYork to see it I'm gona...Any who, Keep writting girl!

De Lazy Lady Lime
person minamino_haruka
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Since you're doing "RENT", I'm seriously SERIOUSLY hoping that "Seasons of Love", my favourite company song in that musical, will play a HUGE role here... v~_____________________________~v
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, just wanted you to know that i\'m sorry bout how i reacted to your fic before... i\'m an idiot, never watched \'Rent\' before ^____^ my loss. anyways,love the chappy, i\'m a sucker for hurting kenshins ^___^ update soon!
person Knives
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you\'re still writing! You\'ve actually motivated me to go get my Rent cd (original cast), too, and listen to it again. *sigh* still as great as ever!
I\'m jst wondering, how does Kenshin afford the medicines? I really don\'t know how it works, like do they get them cheap from the state or something? I hope they do, \'coz it\'s not like kenshin has a job or anyone will hire him (stupid bigots!). Anywayz I\'m loving it, don\'t know why you\'ve got 2 star rating but I\'m voting 5++! ^_~
person Digital Siren
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve never seen Rent, but this REALLY makes me want to do so. Your characterization-as mentioned by others-is very deep. There\'s so many facets to everyone\'s personality so far, and don\'t let people put you down. This looks like this can only end in pain...which is GREAT, because I\'m the little sadist. Mwahah! ^^ This is really great and I\'m looking forward to more.
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh....better... kenshin is cute here, but i still dont like the tomoe/kaoru comparing. they are two diff. people with two WAY diff. personalities.. anyways, good job

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