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person CybrEmly01
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this one too. Supernatural romances are a weakness of mine.

*gives T-san-san a BIG snuggle* Sorry \'bout that, I\'ve an overabundence of
affection at the moment. *grins and waggles eyebrows* Lucky you and VERY
lucky me. *giggles*

Oh, and I found my favorite of your new(er) reviewers. I like Dev. I have no
idea why, I just do. *shrug*

Update soon please!

Ja,
CybrEm
person De Lazy Lime
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow!

The blood and gore of chappie 6 was not to much and not to little. Made your skin crawl abit but not so bad that you have to skip a few sentences. I liked it.

Ah, Well, I think Kaoru KICKS ASS! and she does. I lOVE her character. I really hate it when people write her to be...scared...pathetic...Too much the damsel in distress. I mean it\'s good for her to be the damsel but she shoule be given due credit to atleast hold her own, when it gets to hard then Kenshin can save her and RAVISH her. Nice job on the \"Ravishing\" by the way. Although in summer heat, cold showers still won\'t help...much. I am NOT complaining in the least.
Now I really like the way you did Kenshin. AT FIRST GLANCE... I was affraid that he would be a little whiny or go over on the \"I\'m Not Worthy\" bit, what with his reaction to what fate dealt him, But he seems to be taking it rather well. There is nothing more pathetic than a character or person who can\'t suck it up and deal with what ever life spits at them. Granted alot of what you get hit with maybe hard at first but there is always a way to get through.
Mou!, well I\'m blahbering too much.

All and all a gold sticker and THANKYOU VERY MUCH for more wonderful chappies to stimilate the mind. And Keep up the GREAT WORK!! please!!!

Eternaly Greatful,
De Lazy Lime
person girl from ipanema
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I laughed my head off with those poor cops. \"Aliens\" sounded really good at that point. And the joining was really good too. As I said before, you are giving Linay and \"Broken Pieces\" a run for their money.
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahh... much better ^____^ k&k initiated!! finally. haha, update soon!
person lere
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHHH!!HH!!! You never lost your touch! What a fantastic lemon! It was your best lemon, ever!!!!! I love the chapters! Kaoru fighting the cops at the aley was very good. And after that the mating was VERY HOT! I must congratulate you about Kaoru\'s profile. You took the risk and mada ger personality different from your others fics. And I think that was perfect. A vampire Kaoru must be different, she is not a kendoist Kaoru from ancient Japan. But yet you made her his sweet Kaoru when they were togheter: point again! I can\'t wait to read more because it keeps coming better andter.ter.

Big hugs my dear sensei!

Lere
person Deviation
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... *giggles* Normally I don\'t really keep tabs on RK fanfiction, but this one grabbed me, and the more I read, the more I can\'t help but keep reading. Your style is absolutely lovely... such raw emotion and feeling in it that I\'m just amazed. The flow of the story is perfect and there\'s a fabulous balance in the dialogue and description. It\'s very clear and unique, and I was squealing when I saw you\'d updated again. And what an upd LO LOL! Mou, that was amazing! I truly am in love with the way you tell a story, and I\'m very grateful you decided to share your talent. *grins* Thank you very much for a wonderful read, and in advance for the continuation of this story. I love it. ^___^
person Linwe
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH!! More more!! This is getting so good! I like Sano\'s reaction to everything that\'s happening, he doesn\'t seem to be as much of a rooster-head as usual which is a nice change. And *Kenshin* - ::swoon::.

I hope you get the next chapter up soon, I\'m nearly dying of suspense!

Keep writing please, you write so well!

~Linwe
person De Lazy Lime
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY YAY YAY YAY!!!

MORE MORE MORE!!!

I am so happy you updated... and now I can hardly wait for your next installment.

THANKYOU THANKYOU THANKYOU!!
Ken-san to the rescue for Kaoru-chan! I imagine their meeting is going to be fairly interesting.

Your Fan,
De Lazy Lime
person angua
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another amazing chapter, I want more! ^_^. I´m looking forward to read the next chapter (they meet finally!).
angua
person lere
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally!FINALLY!!!! FINALLYYYYYYYYY!!!! My favorite couple togheter again!!!!!! I just can\'t wait to see THE MEETING!!!! I\'m sooooooo exitated!!! And the amber eyes.... Battousai is here too! I love the story soo much! It\'s dark but sexy too. And Kaoru is OCC, but I love her strength and her strong caracter. She is his perfect match. Can\'t waiiiiit!!!!

Love you! Big hugs, sensei!

Lere

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