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uhmmm... i dont know if you meant to or not, but that one scene with kenshin and his great grandmother was sort of like incest... kinda gross...

ah well, anyways, soujirou\'s gf should burn in hell for making the police get enough hints to catch kaoru... and i dont know why you\'re making kaoru such a bitch...

update soon!

wow...amazing chapter! i cannot wait until kenshin meets kaoru. update quickly! this is just too good for words!
~Sephiress

Wheeeeeeeeee! I love this unfolding plot! It\'s downright awesome! YAY, KENSHIN AND KAORU FINALLY MEET IN THE NEXT CHAPTER! That means... we\'re one step closer to lemony stuff! =) GOOD JOB, KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!

-Nikki-chan

I have to say, this story is one of the better ones I\'ve read recently. It\'s refreshing to see someone put a new spin on both a general idea and the fandom. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.
On a related topic, a: have you seen Van Helsing, and b: have you ever read Laurell K Hamilton\'s \"Anita Blake, Vampire Hunter\" books?

yes yes!!! its an update!!! and no no!! its a cliffie!!! update sooon!!!

Very nice! I\'m was so rooting for Kaoru, backing her up in the boxing ring. I wanted to slap some sense into her family. Why would they defend the other girl when she is obviously acting out of jealousy? Why didn\'t either her \'father\' or brother have faith in her talents? She doesn\'t seem arrogant to me, and if she was she has every right to be! Bet they both feel dumb now after she had to explain everything to them as the idiotic men that they are! Ugh! Kenshin better step up to the plate and meet Kaoru soon. I bet that meeting will be awesome and I totally look forward to it! I enjoyed this chapter though, good job.

BRRRRRR! Kaoru was sooo scary! Why is she so hotheaded? She was like Battousai (scary and cold) and like Saito too (rude). But i\'m biting my nails to read about THE MEETING! Who? Kenshin and Kaoru, of course! Will Battousai be there later? Please, kgoingoing soon!

Big hug sensei!

lere

*slow motion* n-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


You ended it soooooooo fast ^^;;;;;;;; *cries* me want more ..... why does it end so fast ^^x



Me loved it ... you must continue .

where\'s kaoruuu??

This is promising to be an epic tale--with a glossary, no less! :) Very creative idea with great details. And I say the gorier and sexier the better! Keep it up.