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person Kao-gurl
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Ken isn is so cool!:) I cannot wait til the next chapter. Update soon. I cannot wait to find out what happens next. Do you have any idea how long this story will be?
person catti-dono
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Blessed be Kami!! That last part was fabulous!!! You must be feeling well to give us two updates on two of your stories (does a flip)!! Soooo, whats next?!?!?!? Do I hear an update for Black Hawke????? Go head people!!! ask nicely, Tsuki-sama we want an update on BlackHawke (by the way people you can read that on MediaMiner.org under the name of Mangetsu') HAHA must throw in another plug (DODGES TSUKI-SAMA'S BOKEN) (OUCH!!).

Love Ya (kudos to cameron-chan)!!!

Bows and bangs head on tatama

catti-dono (baka deshi)
person girl from ipanema
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ho, ho, ho, this suspense is KILLING me!. I have been waiting for this encounter FOREVER. 'nough said.
person De Lazy Lime
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aloha Okaasan!

OMG! HE'S COMING!!

Wow I can feel the terror in them! I want to run and hide myself but then I remember that this is only fiction...
Your way with words leaves me gapping in the air like a fish out of water! I am in such awe of your literary art!
THANKYOU!! It's going to take me a few minutes to get the hair on the back of my neck to calm down!! PLEASE DON'T Leave us hanging on that type of ending for too long!!

Lots of Love and Prayers,
De Lazy Lime
person lere
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I told you before, but I'll tell again!!!!! You made a monster!!! A sexy monster!!!! I love Kenshin like that!!! The eyes, the hair, huuuummmmmm!!!! I think I'm a monster too, hehe.

Wonderful chapter sensei, like allways! But I want to know how Kenshin turned Cel and why is he like that. Will Kaoru be able to calm him????

Big hugs from Brazil!!!

Lere
person tease-me
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you still haven't updated??? pleeeeease update!
person tease-me
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC SOOO MUCHH!
person Nguardian
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo sorry that I did not review for the last chapter, at least not on this archive. I was going to but I think I just kept putting it off and by the time I realized that I hadn't the next chapter was up. Not that I am complaining or anything, I just feel bad that I haven't kept up with my own commitments when it comes to reviewing. But I figured I better do this now or I will forget again. Both chapters were really good. The moment between Soujiro and Kaoru was really touching, and the sibling bond was portrayed really well. Although brothers and sisters fight there is always that bond of care and love that is not easily broken between them. Though if my bro. knew that I was g hig his computer at this moment he would've a lot to say about brother sister bonds. lol.
As for this new chapter, I can't wait to see how the clans are going to react to him. Though I do believe that Kaoru will be able to calm him down once they see each other again. His soul is crying out for comfort only she can give him. So until next time.
Later.
person De Lazy Lime
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh aahhh! So, 'Cel' is like a vamp'ed-out version of Battousai? I like!! I like alot!!
I was wondering how Kenshin was going to tthe the whole 'death of a policeman on his hands' thing. So far I like the way he's handling it.

OMG!! I can't wait to read the next chappie!! There sur hel hell are going to be alot of super surprised people.
I am curious though, since Kaoru is 'The Source' would that possibly bring her rank to be above her father and Aoshi? Since she is Mate to The f Lea Leader, I just sort of assume that things will be changing alot for her and every on else of course.

Anway, Love the action and YAY! Sano and Megumi interaction! Wonder how Megumi's going to handle this. Ya know I was thinking... Did you smell something burning? Yah that was my light bulb burning my hair!
Anyway, I was wondering is it at all possible to change the way a "made" is created so that it is not bad and has more sense, I mean it has to be super complicated so not everyone can do it, I ask this b/c I think the "made" is a good idea but I wish there was a way to make them better, you know so Sano and Megumi could join if they want too. I love them too much to leave them out completely...OH Another idea!! Maybe Kenshin could do it!! I mean make "clean made" Then Sano would be more poweful and better able to help Kenshin and still be his partner, he would be like Kenshin sort of Half human half vamp... Anyway, just thought I'd tell ya what I was thinking, this happens alot you know.. the whole thinking thin
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OH!! WHERE IS MISAO!?! I miss her happy bouncy face!

*whew* ah well I went a little loooong there. Uh well I love the pace you bring out the chappies! And I think I will pop over to Media Miner and check out what you've got there.. tee hee!

Lots of Prayers and love!
De Lazy Lime
person girl from ipanema
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As Megumi san would say: "Ho, ho, ho." Hiko will not know what hit him, poor thing. I've been waiting for this meeting for ages. Make it good. And thanks for updating often. There are so many good stories out theret a t a left unfinished, sigh.

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