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person Samuria
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story you have a talent for creating a fealing of suspence. Please update soon!

P.S. You're fight seans are amazeing
person MZ.AMbER EYES
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww... i wasn't mentioned...

ah well, i'm really glad that you've decided to continue this fic! it's an awesome story ^____^

and i was wondering...maybe you could write a lemon for 'the bad kid'...no? :p

update soon!!
person lere
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey sensei! I already sent a review about this chapter at FF.net, but...well... You are the best, so you deserve TWO reviews!!! Hehe! I hope you liked the links I sent you about the doujinshi. Those are HOT! HENTAI Lere!!!!

Big hugs from Brazil, my dear friend!!!

Lere
person polaris-fire-star
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You finally went back and told us what happened to Karou and Sou.
ME SOOO HAPPY!!!!
person Ian
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA!!!! FINALLY!! TAHNK YOU THE CHAPTER! I found only a few mistakes but hardly noticable. NOW PLEEEEEEEASE HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
person Sephiress
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
heya tsuki-san

great to see u have updated over here on aff.net, and i hope there isnt as much trouble here in the future

the chappie was great. it makes me all the more anticipated for kenshin's grand entrance in front of kaoru's family and the rest of the 'clan'. the part with soujiro was heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time, he being a favorite of mine.

keep up the great work
Sephiress

p.s. i was a lil disappointed not seeing my name in the review responses ;_;...lol no worries id think i could be mad for sumthin little like that!
person Kaoru-chan
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never get sick of reading this chapter ^^x
I hope another will be out soon



Kaoru-chan ^^^^^^(ja,ne Linda-sama)^^^^^^^^
person CybrEmly01
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter was very well written. I\'m really creeped out. By the way,
he scares me.

I hope you soon get back to Kaoru and her family, \'cause you kinda left them
hanging. Ah, who am I trying to kid? I just want more Kenshin/Kaoru smut.

Until next time Tsuki-san!

CybrEm
person Clemen
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I haven\'t written a reviw. I\'ll been so busyely.ely. Sorry, my friend. Just finish reading the last chapter and I must say, I hate it when you leave us hanging like that. Please update soon. Ahh yes, I been working on my fanfic, I\'ll going to send it you soon as I can, hopefully, you like. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
person Nguardian
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome chapter. If Saitou was really the evil villain then this is exactly how I would picture him. Ruthless, but at the same time loyal and faithful to those who have given their allegiance and fidelity to him.
So we finally get an incite into the workings of The Black Diamond, I can hardly wait for the confrontation between Him and The Mighty Fang of Pythagoras. It should be a glorious battle.
Well I have not much to say, other than to say that I hope you get your much needed rest and not to let everything consume you.
Well until your next up, I , I wish you much luck.
Later.

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